Vergil-demon in blue:

People over use the Term EMO -_-;... IMHO....

ASSASIN RAPTOR FARM... a Guild wars farm poem...

Mooveing out of Rata sum
The ressorection shrins shines like a second sun...

that annoying short Asuran with impeckable grammer
Wants me to fetch him a Left handed sproket spanner

Now aquireing the "Asuran bodyguard"
I slip past the Raptors, threw Ratasums back yard.

Useing Flame Dijin haste
and mooveing with Grace.

to the cold damp cave I arive.

Can I survive?
this Gigantick Tide!?

Of Bountifal Raptor nestleings?

Running along them all.
and pray I dont fall >__<

I luckly activate, my shadowform!
and thoes basterd Raptors corner me in a swarm.

With a Meteor shower
I show them my power

and some bed of coals
I burn into them Holes

But before they can run
I send them home

With a Phionix spell
and all I got... was a Assasin tome -_-...

Back to Rata sum
where I stare at the second sun.

and Rerun my farm...

and although im so bored...
I pray they drop a Elemental sword



A stupid Farm im doing in Guild wars to get a Elemental sword Wich is a Verry rare Item drop XP!!!!....I felt like writeing somthing reeeeally wierd X3

lol ok that put a smile on my face XD and I know poeple over use emo, trust me -_-

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expect_nothing:

I will right a poem soon

Sweet. It's good to have you back EN. Havent seen you here in a while. We're lookin forward to seeing some more of yours.

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I made this one for a friend over the summer, he liked it so I hope some of you will as well.

It's up to you

Time to get up
Onto your feet
When you read this note
Read it carefully
Get over your worries
Get over your fears
Show her you love her
Show her you care
It might take a minute
Might take a day
It all depends
On what you say
You don’t have to do it
There’s no need to talk
I’m sure she’ll be fine
On that cold mountain top
As you sit there
Alone on that tree
She’ll be up there
Slowly dieing
If you choose to bring her back
Then I only have this to say
You made the right decision
I know that's what she’ll stay

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Red wings Black:

I made this one for a friend over the summer, he liked it so I hope some of you will as well.

I can see why he liked it, it makes you think. I liked it.

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Break:

I can see why he liked it, it makes you think. I liked it.

lol thanks I'm glad you like my poem/letter I'll post more up later on ^.^

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Red wings Black:

I made this one for a friend over the summer, he liked it so I hope some of you will as well.

It's up to you

Time to get up
Onto your feet
When you read this note
Read it carefully
Get over your worries
Get over your fears
Show her you love her
Show her you care
It might take a minute
Might take a day
It all depends
On what you say
You don’t have to do it
There’s no need to talk
I’m sure she’ll be fine
On that cold mountain top
As you sit there
Alone on that tree
She’ll be up there
Slowly dieing
If you choose to bring her back
Then I only have this to say
You made the right decision
I know that's what she’ll stay

A really good poem RwB. If only more people would see that sooner too >.<

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Cobalt:

A really good poem RwB. If only more people would see that sooner too >.<

thanks, it always makes me happy to know people like my poems

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Who needs ture love when you have cookies!!???!?!?

Red wings Black:

I made this one for a friend over the summer, he liked it so I hope some of you will as well.

It's up to you

Time to get up
Onto your feet
When you read this note
Read it carefully
Get over your worries
Get over your fears
Show her you love her
Show her you care
It might take a minute
Might take a day
It all depends
On what you say
You don’t have to do it
There’s no need to talk
I’m sure she’ll be fine
On that cold mountain top
As you sit there
Alone on that tree
She’ll be up there
Slowly dieing
If you choose to bring her back
Then I only have this to say
You made the right decision
I know that's what she’ll stay

nice man...i really like it keep up the good work...hope you write more...

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"The sky cries,
The rain has fallen...
The river rises
I drift,i float to eternity..."
-Pearl The Shattered Jewel-


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vote this BUNNY! for total world domination

BUM BUM BUM! time for my bi-annual poem!

 

Almost Paranoid

 

People think I’m happy,

I’m smiling all the time,

 

People think I’m Crazy,

All I do is rhyme,

 

Am I better as a lunatic,

Or should I be an intellect?

 

 

It’s all in what you believe…

 

 

I don’t believe in sunshine,

It never made me happy,

 

I don’t believe in those pills,

That make you feel less crazy,

 

I don’t believe in country, I don’t believe in church,

I don’t believe in friends, oh doncha wanna lurch?

 

I do believe in time, I do believe in lies,

I do believe in god, wasn’t that a surprise?

 

I know you think I’m weird, I think the same of you,

You could recommend a doctor, but I wouldn’t remember who,

 

It’s not that I don’t want help, but you see money is tight,

And all things considered, I think I’ll be alright,

 

 

Maybe it’s you, maybe it’s me, maybe we’re almost paranoid

 

 

Although I’m always happy, the world has got to change,

It’s not the world itself, but the people who are strange,

 

Opinions are like backsides, everybody has one,

Everyone is different, and shines like a rising sun,

 

But opinions also stink, and far from common belief,

If we got rid of them all, we’d be in a state of relief,

 

I don’t believe in politics,

Everything’s a lie,

 

I don’t believe in lawyers,

They all deserve to fry,

 

I don’t believe in teachers, I don’t believe in you,

I don’t believe in lovers, none of ya have a clue,

 

I do believe in heaven, I do believe in hell,

I do believe in magic, if that’s not there names oh well,

 

You know I’ll never change, not even for myself,

It’s too bad there’s no pills, or Medicine on the shelf,

 

Of course I’m not broken, I’m fine the way I am,

I think you should join me, if not… oh damn,

 

 

It could be me, I think it’s you, I know your almost paranoid.

 

 

 

 

 

yea... I't could be better, but I got tired of revising it. 

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BUM BUM BUM! time for my bi-annual poem!

 

Almost Paranoid

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People think I’m happy,

I’m smiling all the time,

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People think I’m Crazy,

All I do is rhyme,

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Am I better as a lunatic,

Or should I be an intellect?

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It’s all in what you believe…

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I don’t believe in sunshine,

It never made me happy,

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I don’t believe in those pills,

That make you feel less crazy,

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I don’t believe in country, I don’t believe in church,

I don’t believe in friends, oh doncha wanna lurch?

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I do believe in time, I do believe in lies,

I do believe in god, wasn’t that a surprise?

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I know you think I’m weird, I think the same of you,

You could recommend a doctor, but I wouldn’t remember who,

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It’s not that I don’t want help, but you see money is tight,

And all things considered, I think I’ll be alright,

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Maybe it’s you, maybe it’s me, maybe we’re almost paranoid

<!--[if !supportEmptyParas]--> <!--[endif]-->

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Although I’m always happy, the world has got to change,

It’s not the world itself, but the people who are strange,

<!--[if !supportEmptyParas]--> <!--[endif]-->

Opinions are like backsides, everybody has one,

Everyone is different, and shines like a rising sun,

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But opinions also stink, and far from common belief,

If we got rid of them all, we’d be in a state of relief,

<!--[if !supportEmptyParas]--> <!--[endif]-->

I don’t believe in politics,

Everything’s a lie,

<!--[if !supportEmptyParas]--> <!--[endif]-->

I don’t believe in lawyers,

They all deserve to fry,

<!--[if !supportEmptyParas]--> <!--[endif]-->

I don’t believe in teachers, I don’t believe in you,

I don’t believe in lovers, none of ya have a clue,

<!--[if !supportEmptyParas]--> <!--[endif]-->

I do believe in heaven, I do believe in hell,

I do believe in magic, if that’s not there names oh well,

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You know I’ll never change, not even for myself,

It’s too bad there’s no pills, or Medicine on the shelf,

<!--[if !supportEmptyParas]--> <!--[endif]-->

Of course I’m not broken, I’m fine the way I am,

I think you should join me, if not… oh damn,

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It could be me, I think it’s you, I know your almost paranoid.

WTF happened to that when I just quoted it? o.0 oh well, let's just ignore it >.>

WHOA! that's awesome! this was one of the best poems I read in this thread! good job! honest, clear work ;]

w-wow really? I didn't think It was one of my better ones, but shows you what I know.

we really do need more activity in here.  

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I agree >.>

Sorry im not who I was
or how I used to be

Sorry I dont feel what I used to feel
and see what I used to see

Sorry I cant say what I want
Say what I feel is right

But its like whenever I open my moulth
it just ends up starting a fight

so il shut my **** moulth
My will has flown south

Il keep what I feel inside
Keep my dignity and my pride

Wound up tight so no one gets in
Now to the story this is wear I right

Fin.

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Theres a hole in the world like a Great black pit and ists filled with people who are filled with ***!.

^Thanks to Eva ^__^ <3

This thread has actually woken up. And of all people it was Break . Well I'm glad you finally posted another one. It's good to see this place running again.
But about your poem: It wasnt bad. Is this poem about your thoughts or is this a fictional person in your story? I dont really get where the paranoia comes into play though. He says things he believes and doesnt believe in a lot. But nothing strikes me as sounding paranoid.

 

                                          Beware the Moon


Beware the moon, have you heard of it?
The time of night when the darkness
takes on strange features,
and unleashes horrifying creatures.

Beware the werewolf,
when the full moon looms in the sky
casting shadows of gloom across the ground,
foreshadowing certain doom.

A violent beast,
with an unrelenting hunger
for flesh, bone, and terror.
A never ending feast.

You'll hear it's howl then it starts to growl.
Bares it's fangs,
it snarles and bears it's razor sharp teeth beneath.
Behold this monstrostiy.
full of anger, hate, and animosity.
A vicious foreboding beast,
that should never be unleashed on society.

With gigantic paws, piercing claws and powerful jaws.
Full of think dingy hair.
if you stumble into their lair
and your eyes meet their stare,
you'll wish it were a nightmare.

Go ahead, run if you dare.
You won't escape,
you're only hope is a silver bullet.
Put your finger on the trigger and pull it.
You'd better just pray you dont miss it.

Beware the Vampire.
Known for their insatiable lust for blood.
The only food thats good to them.
Stepping out from behind a drape,
wearing a dark hood and long black cape.

Evil beings of mythical lore.
Don't bother to lock the door,
they'll pour in like smoke from the floor.
A member of the undead, eyes beet red.

With just one glare,
they will instill fear into your heart.
Going straight for the neck,
they nibble, bite, and tear.
You're life literally in their jaws,
they can feast at leisure or tear it apart.

Known for their cunning in seduction,
once you look into their eyes
your mind, body and soul are theirs for exploitation.
On the night of the blood red moon,
they will conspire to transpire.
Only holy water will save you from the slaughter.
Or a cross to keep them at bay,
it will keep you safe for another day.

Beware the Witches
Flying on their broomstick.
Casting spells that make you sick.
Crafting their plagues and curses,
all the while laughing and cackling.
Creating concoctions consisting
of a black cat, wing of a bat, and a hairless rat.
Portions of different magical potions.
Dispensing a spell 
straight from the depths of hell.
The likes of which no mortal can repel.

Beware the Moon,
now you've heard of it.
The time of night when the darkness
takes on strange features.
And unleashes horrifying creatures.




I know this one's not so good. Still working on 3. So thought I would post something for now.

 

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It just seemed like a good name for my poem, and it's not really based on one of my story's.

 

you poem wasn't bad cobalt.  I actually love vampires so it was good to see something like that in there. I will say some of your rhymes weren't very fluid.hunger and terror didn't make a very nice transition for me. but it was still good! I hope to see the other 3 soon. so get to it! 

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Blue, your poem wasn't too shabby either. at times I find difficulty in trying to decipher what exactly your try to say with your poems, but look at what's happened to nirvana. :D
 

 

 

 

 

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i like it. it was feeling like the sad poems were taking over the thread until you and break came  :P

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