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  •  04-19-2008, 6:58 AM 273766

    Fan-fiction. What more can I say?

    Heh... well, I guess I'll feel all the worse for this but... ENTER IF YOU DARE!

     

     

    The Legend of Ael: Glass Doors

     

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    Thunder rent the night sky, following the lightning as it weaved its jagged tapestry through the darkness. Rain fell in huge droplets, splashing as it fell into steadily growing puddles, blown fitfully by angry zephyrs. A few stray leaves tumbled by the lone road, its trail barely noticeable in the pitch. In the distance, seemingly frozen, the shadow of a village loomed, its bulk almost startling in the cold black. Lights winked like conspirators from the windows of buildings. Even from a half a mile out, the sound of cheering could be heard. Somehow, despite the dismal weather, this did not seem out of place. With an impatient toss of his head, the boy absentmindedly wiped rain from his eyes, tugged his hood lower and sniffled. It was cold. Not as cold as it could have been, but it was weather that normal people tried to avoid. Such musings made him laugh. He was not, in many cases, normal. Not by common decree.

                    The woman standing beside him watched the village passively, her only motion being the barest shuffle of her worn down boots. Finally, without a word, the boy began to walk the last steps towards possibility and the woman, groaning, followed. In the seconds that it took for her to reach his side, his pace, the rain had intensified, trying to drive them into the springy mud, quickly turning into bog. That was also expected. In fact, the boy would have been shocked and perhaps a little disappointed if this leg of his journey got any easier. So far, all he had done was walk, and talk, though never often. He’d been expecting something much more arduous than what he had encountered but was, obviously, under no illusions that things would remain the same. He would be a fool to think that life remained easy. He would, he knew, be acting his age. And that was more than a little younger than he felt.

                    They had come from the forest about six miles back, their supplies restocked by the men with pointed ears, living their lives in the tall trees. His companion, Sarah, called them elves. The boy, feeling this was ridiculous, called them people, and felt that was all that mattered. And yet not all had been easy for them. They had lost two of their party before the forest had even come into view and, to make things worse, another had decide to remain within the peaceful haven of the people in the woods. The boy did not despise her for this. Indeed, he respected her decision but did not agree with her forsaking their quest. Perhaps because he would never imagine leaving the path he walked now. It was his quest.

                    The two came to a sign that revealed the village to be Spain, with a population of fifty and three. For a moment the two stared at the sign as though trying to work out a puzzle. Where he was from, Spain had been a country, prosperous if his geography teacher had been right. He didn’t know. He had not cared much for geography, and had put it in the same vein as art. Shrugging, he made to move away when the woman tapped his shoulder lightly, at first so soft that he thought it could be rain. There was no reason to believe otherwise but he turned anyway. The past had taught him to be careful even at the best of times. Even in the attic, if it came to it. But that was something he rarely thought on nowadays.

                    “It won’t be a coincidence. This may be a sign.” The boy nodded, brushing aside dripping strands of dark hair from his eyes. “Does the number fifty-three mean anything to you?”

                    “Not that I can think of.” He spat into the darkness and sniffled for awhile. “But I suppose we’ll ask loads of questions, or be asked them.” When his companion frowned, puzzled, the boy nodded, more for himself than for her benefit. “Like in the inquisition, you know?” Shrugging, he led the way and, after a hesitant look at the signpost, the woman decided to follow. Thinking on the name of the village, he wondered whether they believed in god. There were such things as gods, he had found. There were none for him to believe in, but gods all the same.

                    The cheering grew as they entered the village like shadows, passing by small houses that lined either side of the road. Each house seemed to be the same; flat roofed, nearly windowless but for a glass rectangle that peeked out from either side of each front door. Even the doors were the same. Wood, painted green, and so old that most were peeling in the rain and wind. The boy looked at these without interest, aware that his companion took every opportunity to look long at some shaded object jutting from long untended bushes. If anything, the village itself was the only thing that seemed out of place. The road was turning into bog quickly now, but he guessed that before the rain, the road had been almost bone dry. And yet to either side of him there grew bushes outside the houses. And in the distance way back the way they had come, he knew it would be possible to discern the faded green of the forest, looking like a momentary double horizon during a clear morning. It was like something cut from a movie. These days he could barely even remember what had been so appealing about watching such things. Unconcerned with what Sarah had begun to look at in the soil, the boy drew out his last Wispa bar and proceeded to eat it.

                    “Fifty-three, the sign said.” The woman clicked her fingers, which then became wreathed in flame and watched as steam rose to be blown wildly away. “Maybe and maybe not, kiddo, I’m not sure… It seems like a lot of people have been using this road all of a sudden.” Nodding again, the boy eyed the houses and threw the wrapper of his chocolate to his right. “It’s kind of cold. Think you could find a place to stay?”

                    “Yeah, I can but I’d like to know why there’s cheering here, especially in this weather.” With a shrug, the boy pointed just ahead, seemed to think deeply and shook his head. “Then again, we’d most likely find out from a hotel or something.”

                    “They are called inns here.” Grunting, the boy closed his eyes and thought of where they would stay. An image of a sign creaking in the wind like the batwing doors of a Wild West saloon came to his mind, and sounds of laughter coming loudly from within. He thought he could distinguish some voices from others; a barmaid that had been pinched on the rump squealed, and the cook was talking to the hotel manager – not the innkeeper, no matter what the mage thought proper – and she was moaning about something that had to do with wetness. Using his mind to pry into the cook’s thoughts, the boy smiled and opened his eyes. “Find one?”

                    “We passed it.” The boy smiled in reply. Without another word the two began to backtrack.

                    They came to the inn quickly, and without encountering anyone, the rain falling hard enough to cover the sound of any that hid from them, strangers in this place. The boy was intrigued to know what was happening, but understood that maybe it was better to remain unseen. The batwing doors creaked on old hinges, slightly slanted and worn with age. From within came silence, and the wafting smell of tobacco, strong enough to make the boy pull a face in disgust. The woman looked at the building apprehensively, rubbing the side of her nose with a manicured finger. There was something about the place that spoke of something long gone. Something was wrong, the boy knew, and it likely had something to do with whatever was causing the villagers to cheer somewhere in the distance.

                    “Do you see it?”

                    “Yes.” The boy shrugged uncomfortably and eyed the bronze number that hid, smothered by creepers that ran to the roof. “Fifty-three...” It could be a coincidence but he doubted it. After all, hadn’t his magic, his power led him and his companion to this very building. “I hate this.” He muttered as she went to enter. “I hate having to be your son, or nephew or some other relation. I really just want to go in and tell them who I am. Why do I have to be a kid?”

                    “You’re not inside; you are ancient. And, for once you may have pulled my leg. There’s something wrong here, I can feel it.” She tittered. It was a sound that the boy related to adulthood and its wry humours. “You may have to tell them. Or show them… either one. Not that you need permission.” Shaking his head, thinking that she was acting like a child – oh, the irony, he thought – the boy pushed on the batwing doors slowly, expecting them to fall to pieces. They looked to be made out of old chair legs, funnily enough. When they did not come apart, he entered, his nose wrinkled at the aroma of tobacco smoke.

                    It was a small enough establishment, dimly lit and full of odours worse than those smelt from outside. A wooden desk sat in front of a rack of keys. There were ten keys, the boy noticed. Four of them were gone. A stairway rose beside the desk with a varnished banister, ending in shadows thrown by a lantern that hung about the corner. It had a haunted feel to it, this place. And the boy could tell that very well.

                    A curtain separated this strange lobby from another room, full of tables and small stools. There were two lanterns alight in this room, and it revealed a lone visitor to one side, a cup of steaming liquid between gloved hands. It was hard to see what manner of person the loner was but the boy was more intrigued to know where the keeper of this hotel, or inn was.

                    “You check the common room.” The woman frowned, her eyes sweeping her surroundings. Pointing at the curtains, she looked at him with worry in her eyes. “I’ll check upstairs.” Nodding, the boy stepped through the thin veil of cloth without a backward glance. Immediately the lonesome figure stirred, dark eyes watching him make his way over. As he came closer the boy could see that the man had an axe by his side. With a foot the man pushed a stool out from under the circular table, pulling out a small case of nickel with his left hand. He was dressed all in black. Smiling easily the boy took a seat, watching as the man took a roll of tobacco lit it on the nearby lantern.

                    “Hai there, stranger, it’s cold out today. Maybe it’s too cold to travel.” Pulling back his hood, the boy ran a hand through his black hair, shaking his head when the man offered him the case of rolled tobacco. He’d seen much, but still believed that smoking was wrong. “Kind of quiet…” he muttered. The stranger nodded, and pulled back his own hood.

                    “I know how old you are.” The man said. “I am Arthur.”

                    “We are well met, Arthur. I don’t think I’ll give my name just yet; such things have often gotten me in trouble, and as for my age… I’m twelve.” The man called Arthur chuckled gruffly and the boy took this time to study the man’s face.

                    It was a young face but worn, lines running furrows from the corners of thin lips that the boy doubted came from smiling overmuch. Dark eyes, black in the shadow of the man’s hood, glittered frighteningly from sunken sockets; eyes that spoke of having seen much, perhaps too much. The nose was a slim thing that jutted out from under the dangerous eyes, it looked to have been broken sometime in the man’s youth. It was a pale but wind battered face that spoke of trials and unimaginable escapades. Still smiling Celtic drummed his fingers on the table and waited to hear what the stranger, Arthur said.

                    “You look twelve, just as I look like a young man, but we both know the truth. In my eyes, perhaps, you see that I have been through much, and have done things that I am not proud of. In yours I see power, and something that makes me feel faint. I will not lie to you, I feel like running scared. That means that you are something greater than I am or will ever be good friend.” Arthur leaned back and took a long drag at his smoke. “I may be many things but I am no fool. I know the legends and tales of prophecy. You,” he whispered lowly, “are Ael.” For a moment the boy looked at the stranger impassively and then, with a grunt he shook his head.

                    “You are mistaken maybe.”

                    “I am not.” Arthur shrugged, his dark eyes seeming to try to pierce the boy’s thoughts. It was an impossible task. In all his travels, the boy had never met someone that had been actually able to read minds. Yet it bothered him that this man thought he knew something of him. “Trust is a thing that must be earned, I see.” Pausing, the man stubbed the smoke out on the table and brushed the embers away without a glance. “Let me tell you about myself…” As though unsure of where to start, the man took another rolled smoke from his nickel plated case and lit it hurriedly. Then, with a deep pull he stubbed that out too and began to speak. What he said startled even the boy.

                    “Right now, at this very moment, I am dead.” The boy eyed Arthur with a frown creasing his youthful features, blue eyes like augers as he tried to see some joke behind the words. The stranger chuckled as though seeing his puzzlement, but he paled at the concentration on the boy’s face. With a slight twist to his lips, the man took the tiniest sip from his steaming drink. “Or, to be frank, I will be soon.”

                    “You’re pulling my leg.” The boy looked about the room and saw they were alone, and his mind puzzled over this. “How are you here then?”

                    “You feel it do you not?” Arthur asked, leaning closer, the smell of beer and woodlands smothering the lingering stench of tobacco. “There is an absence of things. A wrongness that seems to pervert this sleepy town… and I cannot even say that you have a Spanish way of talking, can I?” The man set the tankard down slowly as though thinking deeply, and the boy was tossed the impression that this was no chance meeting either. Just like their arrival at this village and the number of the hotel – or inn, whichever he wanted to call it. It was a wrongness that seemed to be guiding them, and he was unsure where the path ended. Of a sudden the man coughed, bringing him from his worries. “Too many coincidences make destiny, ancient one. Nay,” he held up a hand as the boy went to speak. “Say nothing about your age. Either way I must repeat what I said.” He sat back against the wall again, and the boy wondered how many times the man had sat forwards and back again. “Right now, at this very moment I am dead. Do you understand?” The boy shook his head.

                    “No. I don’t. No more riddles, just explain.” The boy drove his finger into the table twice, to make his point. “It has to do with the cheering no doubt.” He paused then and thought back on the man’s previous statements. Right now, at this moment, I am dead. Or, to be frank, I will be soon. “You said your name was Arthur?”

                    “A kingly name, is it not?”

                    “What is going on here, Arthur? Why can’t you just talk straight?” The man smiled suddenly as though gladdened beyond any measure. “What are you thinking?”

                    “I think as deeply as one may… do you?” For a moment the boy stared and then shuddered. “You talk to a dead man, one that yet lives and draws a semblance of breath. You ask the wrong questions, paladin, and think too broadly. Thoughts should have no depth, no surface. Thoughts should just be.” The man nodded. “There is time… Tonight…” The man stood. “I will tell you of myself.” The barest pause, stifling in the silence as the man and boy eyed each other in open curiosity and bemusement. Suddenly the man spoke. “It took me a while to understand what my nightmares were.” He said gravely, strangely. “It took me a while to see that it was a gift. Do you understand?” The boy remained silent for a moment and then nodded. The man smiled slightly, the barest upturn of his lips. “You have other things to attend to, I see? Perhaps we will continue our tales elsewhere and later.” Rising, the boy nodded, his easy grin slipping away into a stony countenance. A rustle came to them as the curtain shifted to one side, Sarah poking her head in with a lopsided smirk on her face that disappeared upon seeing the boy conversing with the stranger in black.

                    “I found the keeper of this fine establishment.” The mage clicked her fingers, watching the tips spark into flames that danced and flickered before going out. “But he’s not here.” Her eyes swept the room and then locked on the boy. “Are you coming…?” The boy nodded and turned to bid the man goodbye. It was no surprise to find that the man was gone.

                    “Sure. Where are we going to?”

                    It turned out that the inn/hotel had been empty for a while. The upstairs hallway had been littered with three dead bodies that had been crawling with oversized maggots. The room number nine had been open, and Sarah had gone to see what she could find that was of interest. A man had hung himself from the miniature chandelier, his body swinging in winds that gushed in from the open window. Something had chewed off his feet not long ago. Blood still congealed on the floorboards. There had been a letter in his hand though, addressed to a woman named Vivian. From what could be read, the mage had understood that whatever evil had come to this village of Spain had come barely two weeks ago. It was something that she wondered on, and felt must be kept from her companion. Besides this the room had held no interest for her, and the stench had become stronger somehow, more pervasive. It made her feel like her skin was alive with a mind of its own, and was trying to shiver its way from her body. Whatever powers at her disposal, Sarah was not a fool. Like any person in such a time, she fled.

                    “Well, as I said, the inn is empty.” She said now. The boy shook his head.

                    “I disagree. There’s something here alright, and it can see us just as well as we can’t see them.” The boy hefted his rucksack on his shoulders, aware that he had been wearing it non-stop for almost a whole day. “And even if we could, I guess that it would only be a beginning.” For a moment the woman stared at him emotionlessly and then, with a nod, she began to look through the desk in the lobby.

                    “The village is small anyway, so whatever the hell is going on may not be hard to find. In fact, it’s only our business because we have to sleep in this place.” She saw the boy frown and then shrugged, discarding a piece of paper with a grimace. “Alright, fine then. It does seem to hold some mystic quality, but why not just believe that some madman drove everyone to suicide and then left? Why not-? Oh...” She held up a map and shuddered. “I think I was wrong.” The boy came forwards and looked over her arm, almost tiptoeing. She was tall.

                    The map was of the village. It showed the road they had come in on; a broad strip that split the village in half all the way through. This road, in turn, split five times as it ran through the village though, becoming lanes and side-streets and at each end was marked, on the map, a symbol that sent shivers down both their spines.

     “Ael gates…” The boy took the map slowly and blinked once as lightning flashed across his vision. The creaking of the batwing doors and of the sign that had looked the same was almost agonizing in its eeriness. He found himself thinking that this night ticked all the classic boxes of horror films. The empty village, the hanging man with the message to set the antagonists on their way to some confrontation, and the bodies littered in the inn. The man in black with a kingly name, a man that knew much but seemed to be dead or a magician, or even both. A man that disappeared when you turned away; and no-one else had seen him. The thunder and lightening playing tag across the sky while the rain drummed away like the hammer strokes of Thor. The wind howling and making the signs creak, creak, creak. The map littered with strange symbols and only one real way to escape, one main road that lead to somewhere other than a dead end. He did not wish to be fighting in the dark to escape the village of Spain. “What is that? This road isn’t a straight line the others, it runs diagonal to the main road and then cuts in as though to join it. Kind of like....” Of a sudden he saw the sign that the roads made and let out a yell of surprise. “Look at the roads! They make the sign of Krine! Jesus on a bicycle, we should have known.”

    “What you know and what you choose to know are two different things.” Sarah frowned and then took the map back. “And that road you were talking of? It ends with some sort of hall, or arena. The rune is an old form of the elves…” she waited for the boy to laugh as he had always done when what he thought of as myths were mentioned, elves mostly of all… and sighed when he nodded. “It means Kar’yah. A word that has too many meanings, though the main one is…” She folded the map and put it into the back pocket of her jeans, patting her buttocks to make sure it was safely away. “It translates as Hollow, but means darkness either way.”

    “I guess that names mean little now, so you can actually say mine.” Sarah shook her head and the boy shrugged. “Not yet, else we may be found before time. You know that they have tracked you by the mere mention of your name before here.”

    “True… but there’s Ael Gates here. Four of them, would you believe it!” The boy grinned like a child, and Sarah found herself wondering how childlike the boy felt now, having travelled as long as he had, knowing he was older than the eldest. It was a disturbing thought, and one she’d had many a time, but now it rankled on her and made her shake her head, eyes seemingly frozen. The boy still smiled, his eyes somehow seeming to have no colour, but of every shade, cold enough to chill ice. She found herself shivering and lowering her eyes slightly, but not much. “Okay, we’ll do it your way for now, Sarah. But if it comes to it…” The boy paused thinking on what to say. Instead, he placed his hand, now seemingly made of pure light, on the table and watched as it became floating motes of light in the blink of an eye. With that done he shrugged and smiled, childlike again before stepping into the rain. Worried at her friend’s unease the mage followed. He only showed power on objects if there was a cause, usually. She understood though. Come what may, he was still Ael and could do things she could only have nightmares of.

    It turned out that Sarah had wanted to see states of the Ael Gates first of all, so they checked them hurriedly, keeping an eye out for anyone that might stumble into their path. As expected, they saw no-one. Their only sign that life had inhabited Spain, and still did, was the lifeless bodies they saw by each Gate, like some sacrifice. That, of course, and the cheering, though now the cries had a definite rage and deathly excitement about them. They came to each Ael Gate and found them all shattered bar one, the thin slivers of light lying on the floor like pieces of glass, unable to be lifted by any but the boy. He did so reverently, but had no knowledge of how to put the Gate together again. Attempts had resulted in unfortunate happenings. Sarah had stood to one side at each of these shattered doorways to other worlds, watching like a wraith from within the shadows. She did not speak, or try to consol the boy in any way. She just watched and waited. Until they came to the unbroken mirror of pooled light that sat almost carelessly against a wagon.

    “Go.” He said quietly. “If you want…” Silence answered him for a while and then he felt one of those rain-like taps on his shoulder.

    “I can’t. This is my quest now as long as it is yours. Regardless of what may pop up occasionally, like Spain in the middle of nowhere.” The boy laughed. “I think we’re caught you know. I think we might have let something get ahead of us. I doubt it matters.” The boy clapped her hand twice and passed a hand over the Ael Gate, showing a land beyond that looked like a crazed wilderness, covered in rainforests like tufts of hair. “Is that where I’d end up?” He nodded. “It looks nice.”

    “I get that all the time.” The boy chuckled and cocked his hand to the right as though changing the page. An image of castle in the middle of a green plain made him frown. “This is where I am going… I think.” He turned towards her and shrugged. “I just have the feeling that something is going to go wrong all of a sudden.”

    “So! You can’t ask me to leave. I feel like I’m part of you, not your quest. How long have we been fighting to reach the end, to usurp Krine’s plans?” Sarah began to cover the gate with straw. The act made the boy clutch his sides with laughter. After a while she began to giggle too. “I say we go to this Hollow, this place marked with the elven rune.” She waited till the boy began to breath. There was water on his cheeks, likely tears from humour and not rain. “I say we find out why we came here on our way to the celestial heights that mark our end. I think we may need to.” The cheering rose in pitch and the boy had an idea that perhaps it was too late to find out anything. Something was coming and maybe it was best to flee.

    And then he heard the voice of Arthur saying: Right now, at this moment, I am dead. Or, to be frank, I will be soon. Suddenly, the boy felt he could almost see what was happening. “It’s like the witch trials. There’s going to be killing in the Hollow this night. I think we have to stop it.” Frowning, Sarah scuffed her feet on the muddy ground.

    “Need help?” With raised eyebrows the boy nodded for her to take out the map. She did so without a hesitation, even in the rain for which the boy felt an almost insane love for his companion. “Follow me… it’s this way!” Without another word the two began to head off, slowly at first, before sprinting into the rain, reflected by the Gate though the straw, breaking their image into a hundred pieces.

    They came to the place named the Hollows out of breathe, shivering with cold and wild-eyed with exhilaration. Lightning flashed in a crazed dance across the dark heights, thunder called darker prophecies out at them as they crouched, silent and deathly still behind the pillar of a standing stone, their sights filled with the horror that unfurled before them, aware that no matter what came the boy had been right. There would be killing in this place tonight. Sarah took off her cloak as they waited, pulling free the sheath tangled beneath. With dripping hands she drew the sword, another spark of lightening reflecting off its shimmering surface. Looking thoughtfully at the blade, the mage failed to miss the sorrowful look on the boy’s face. It was a look that showed that the child in him still loathed death, though he had dealt it much in his travels. This did not mean that he did not understand what must come, if it was a part of his future then he would accept it with all the grace he could manage.              Sighing, the boy frowned as he realised that although he could see enough of what was occurring, he was no closer to understanding the why of it all.

                    “Let there be light!” Sarah whispered almost painfully. Spreading the fingers of his right hand, the boy obliged.

                    There was a crackle as all the lightening that had gathered that night came together above that place called the Hollow, quieting the cheers and angry yells, making all past brief flashes of light seem like candles. A white blanket spread across the sky, followed by a roar so loud that the standing stone vibrated and fell to one side. In bare seconds the night was driven away, the world seemingly spinning faster, thoughts sluggishly running like men underwater. The storms passed fitfully as the light drove them away, dappling the village of Spain with daylight. For a moment even Sarah sat awed and then she was pulling the dozing figure of the boy to his feet, waking him with a brief clip to his head. Startled, he glared at her and then came to his senses, casting his eyes over the Hollows in the throes of day. It made him hiss.

                    The place was a haven for the dead and dying. Skulls made a rugged path through sharp rocks, leading down to a crescent shaped dent in the ground. Old chairs long thrown away now made seating areas for the crowd. Of the forty-one people that resided in the Hollows, only one was not holding aloft a flaming brand above his or her head, now looking at the sky as though united in prayer. The skulls continued to make a path down the steep slope, and the boy noticed that this was the only way to get into this horrid indent in the landscape. The furthest side, perhaps one hundred feet from the end of the bleached white path, rose steeply like cliffs, the rock smooth like glass. If he had listened more in his classes he would have understood that this place was perhaps the result of a meteor or something of the like. But instead he gazed on it as a child would see a castle for the first time, or the bones of a dinosaur. It was Sarah that made him see was he usually would. Sarah who pointed beyond the awesome sight and into the din of rowdy Spaniards (It still felt weird to call the people of this village as such, but the boy thought “Hey, why not?”) Sarah who made him see the pillar of glass that jutted from the black rock of the Hollow, rising high like a giant pedestal. The boy frowned, thinking on the Ael Gates and then his eyes went wide in realisation. He opened his mouth to speak and was forestalled by the mage, his mouth still hanging ajar.

                    “There’s a woman on that-” She began before shivering, her magic react later than the boy’s. His companion fell silent as the ground exploded outwards and night came once more.

     

    2:

     

    It is the same dream as before. The dream that had made him believe

    3:
     

    At first he is soaring, his eyes can see far and beyond. He is suddenly overcome with the strangest feeling that he is really standing still, and that it is everything else, everything that is and ever will be, rushing past him. The Feeling lasts only as long as the thought, and weirdly this seems to go on so long that he comes to believe that this is all he has ever known and then, with a brief flare of pain he found himself staring across a black land that seemingly lasted forever, and he knew that he must come to this place some time in his life. Almost as quickly as the image comes does it disappear, leaving lines of light in his sight as the picture engulfs him in its rush to seemingly escape; this time he does not even notice the pain. He sees images rushing past as he soars once more. There are images of places that have no meaning to him but will do in some dark future. A barren city whirls its way from his sight, a place full of bones and mist, a place of silence and something worse than death. Out of the corner of his vision he notices a grey tower with a golden ladder standing in a green plain, a lone window peeking from its highest floor. Inside this room, before this image is taken away too, the boy sees a woman looking mournfully at him, her blue eyes startled in her beautiful face. Then this too is taken and he is driven, whisked and pulled. Dragged to a land that is seemingly burning. Somehow, he can tell that this is near the end of what may come. From somewhere he hears a voice talking, almost as in singsong.

    This is the land of Muspelheim, a place of fire and dreams. Come you to this kingdom, paladin? Come you?

    The voice, such as it is, fades to nothing, and once more the boy is flung into the sky, seeing more than he can understand, less than he will ever remember. Yet he knows that he will remember the name Muspelheim when the time comes, and of the words spoken. Come you to this kingdom, paladin?

     

                   

     

     

     

  •  05-10-2008, 10:17 PM 277058 in reply to 273766

    Re: Fan-fiction. What more can I say?

    Pretty nice
    Dont speak, just die!
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  •  06-10-2008, 8:48 AM 280369 in reply to 273766

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    Re: Fan-fiction. What more can I say?

    Wow that was a long read! But well worth it!

    Great work! XD


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  •  06-10-2008, 7:29 PM 280459 in reply to 280369

    Re: Fan-fiction. What more can I say?

    It was very good, but very confusing as well. XD

     

    also, the tiny text makes my eyes hurt, could you please make it normal size next time? 


  •  06-11-2008, 12:57 PM 280526 in reply to 280459

    Re: Fan-fiction. What more can I say?

    I didnt read it yet.. BUT, For any one who cant get by the Small Text. if you have a mouse wheel hold CTRL. and roll it flawards to Either Zoom into the web page, or just enlargen the Text >>;... hope that helps.
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  •  06-11-2008, 1:54 PM 280530 in reply to 280526

    Re: Fan-fiction. What more can I say?

    Its nice.  Very well written.
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  •  06-12-2008, 5:47 AM 280573 in reply to 280530

    Re: Fan-fiction. What more can I say?

    4:

     

    He awoke with a grunt, his eyes darting to the Hollow and the sacrifice pillar that stood in its centre. What memory of the dream remained did little to give him focus, but he tried, and succeeded. Sarah had already recovered, her fleet form flying like liquid steel down the rocky slopes, having seen what had become of this dead land. Only now did the boy come to his senses.
                    Whatever had exploded outwards had set aflame each of the forty-one villagers, turning them into burning effigies that still mumbled, their souls flickering above them like halos. One of these had made it up the still stood with his torch held high, his mouth an O of surprise. Celtic saw that the man’s feet had been ripped away, that the fire clothed figure stood only on the stumps of burnt legs. Wincing, his head pounding, the boy stood shakily, eyeing the Hollow and the form of Sarah almost by the pillar. He looked upon the painting before him, smelt the odour of charred flesh and watched as the ground ran with flames. It looked like Hell. Muspelheim, a place of fire and dreams, he thought, his eyes narrowing as they caught sight of a pool of shadow that stood alone in a wide circle of firelight. With a sudden urgency he began to run.

    Sarah reached the pillar and eyed its height with a fierce frown. A slim pale arm hung from the side, ending in a strange sort of blue glove. With a grunt she began to climb, wondering whether or not Celtic had woken up. What he had done… she would have said that such a thing was impossible, but she had seen it with her own two eyes. The boy had brought the day to them, and, having been a science teacher once in her life, she understood the implications of such an act. She had known Celtic had power, great power beyond understanding, but such colossal feats she could only attribute to… well, to gods. And event hat word didn’t come close. She felt like laughing as she climbed, and she smiled as she struggled to find footholds, glad of something to keep her mind from puzzling over what had just exploded. It was then that she heard a yell behind her.
                    Now, she had always been a fan of the comic Spiderman, and admired his grace and skill. However, she was no spider. When the yell came, it sounded so distant that at first she imagined that it was the wind. Only hearing the youthful tone in the cry helped her to realise that it was her friend. And yet, she was no spider. She could only crane her neck slightly to the left and right, or risk plummeting to her death. Glancing down now, she understood how far she had come. She was almost at the top.
                    “Sarah! Get down from there! It’s not safe!” Celtic’s voice dwindled and faded, as though snatched from the very air. Frowning, she looked about for him and gave a mental shrug. It was so dark that she wouldn’t see him anyway. Whatever it was, he could tell her after.

     (Have to add  more. Hope the font size is alright now, it's just that I prefer the smaller fonts... [shrugs] oh well.)

  •  06-13-2008, 7:51 PM 280760 in reply to 280573

    Re: Fan-fiction. What more can I say?

    well, you could write in a smaller font, then make it big when your all done right?

     

    but blue said there was a way to resize text without you doing anything, so maybe you could leave it small. 


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