Gather round little kiddies for this is where il write long/short story's. il start out with a work in progress.

im a bit rusty on the story telling, so il try my best. I would rather have honest feed back, ah-thank you.


HALLOWEEN TOWN: Curse of the pumpkin rider.
Mad king: ~Heavaly inspired by Mad king Thorn, from Guild wars.

 

It was Halloween eav  in green town. and every one was getting there costumes out, and getting ready for the big day tomarrow. Children getting costumes, Tean schedualling party's Parents readying candy. but it was a bit difrant for one Seventeen year old boy... this would be a halloween he would never forget...

"What?" Chis almoast yelled, ande his parents nodded. "your going to have to take Billy and his friends trick or treating tomarrow". Billy was Chris's ten year old brother. who absolutely annoyed the hell out of him... aswell as his friends.. "Dad!?" he looked to his dad for help, but recieved none. "Sorry Kiddo, no partying this year" he said rubbed his sons head. and then ended the conversation, and walked into the other room, and sat on his recliner, tuneing into the news. Chris looked to his mother. his head shook as a feeling of disapointment rained down over his head. "this is so unfair" he tredged up to his room ignoreing his mothers words of re-asurence. locking himself away he left the lights off.

Chris lied alone in his room, and stared at the cieling, his thaughts filled with disapointment, on how his Halloween would be spent away from his friends, and escorting snot nosed poorly costumed naggy trick or treaters, intead of parting with his buddies, and finding pretty woman. his fingers running threw his short thick brown hair. and was behind his ead now.

I wish I could get away...

Thunder struck, and a horse cried out into the night. wich was odd, because nobody owned a horse. Chris popped his head up, and looke out the window. a storm was going on, and there was a man sitting on a horse. and Chris had to admit. the dude had one awsome costume Decked out in old Leather vest and pants with pieces of mettal hear and there, woll scattered along his shoulders that clung to a black cape. but the one thing that really got to him, was the pumpkin on his head, that bore a liveing flame inside it. Keys lined his vest, and he stared up at him. and it then turned and left.

"Wow... now thats a cool costume" he said to himself, before falling back onto his bed, and rested his eyes.

After Halloween... there will be nothing left a voice that was not his own. whisperd in his ear, right before he fell asleep.

The Mad king comes...

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Chis woke up erly the next morning, and he could already feel the Halloween Spirit, but Alas, the disapointment from last nights news still lingerd on into the morning. he felt around the nightstand and finaly found his Cell phone, and pulled it under the cover of his bed sheet, as it was cold any where els but under his sheets. and began to dial numbers, calling his friends to let them know he wouldent make it.

All of them basicly gave him the same message. "Awwww thats too bad" he knew they really didnt give a damn but he'd save them from haveing to plan a Halloween scare on him. he looked to the last friend on his list. "Saveing the best for last man..." he punched i the numbers. "Yo, Jax!, im not gonna be able to make it to the party".

Jax's energetic voice responded mutch difrant from his other friends. "oh, whew, I was just gonna contact you and tell ya not to go , theas Jack holes are setting up a "surprise" just for you" Chis had to laugh. "Well glad I could disapoint them". "So,Chris if your not going to the party what are you doing?" Chris gave Jax the sad story, and his fiend took a moment away from the phone. and then returned. "Sweet, can I come with?, Crystal and I have nothing planned for tonight, we can atleastscare the *** out of other trick or teaters" Chris smiald. wow.. thanks man. "Uh, Sure why not!...but... wouldent you to rather be alone?" again a long pause from Jax. "Listen man, im not trying to scare you hear, but last night I saw a real creepy dude by your house, on a horse. with a big ol pumpkin on his head." Chis nodded. "Yea, I saw him too..." Jax sounded a bit distressed as he went on. "Yea, and he stopped by Crystals, and then my house after words, and I swore some one said somthing before I fell asleep... cant remmember what it was". Chis now remaind silent to think. I get it.. no one stands a chance againsed three teen's... "Yea, meet me at my house at five thirty tonight, you better bring a good costume!". Jax laughed. "Yea, whatever" he then hung up.

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Five o clock rolled around and Chris was waiting outside for his little brother. he was in the Halloween spirit, and sudenly missing the prank party didnt seem so bad. standing by the side walk he turned, as he heard his mother almoast squeal in excitement. as Billy. came out of there front door dressed in the moast surpriseing thing.... a bunney rabit. looking uterly disgusted himself, Billy "hopped" over to his older brother. and took a hold of his hand. "Isnt he adorable!" Chris's mother tugged on her husbands arm and he smiald warmly and nodded in agreement. "Alright, you kids be home before twelve" he warned. and after a good thirty seconds of waveing they where off to go meet with Billy's friends.... aswell as Jax and Crystal.

it ended up Jax and Crystal volenteered to help Billy's friends with there trickertreating. there parents more then delighted as they wanted to stay home and hand out candy and so on. Meeting Jax first who aparently. loved the Idea of dress up. and standing before Chriss was Jax, tall and bulky in his make shift Blue armor a red wig of long hair came out from behind the helm. and his actual blond hair comeing threw portians of the helmate. "Nightmare... from soul caliber?" Chis held back his chuckle. as Jax was a slim man, and his skinny arms didnt fit the outfit. "Dude... he is THEE bad ass of the sieries!" he picked up the non-leathal fiber glass sword replica and waved it around. "...no costume Chris? " he shook his head. "Nah, im told my face is scarry enoph as is". both Billy and Jax had to laugh, aswell as the two kids behind Jax. one as the Red-ranger. the other as what looked to be Frankenstien. "Billy!", "Tommas, Corey!" Billy walked and marvald at his friends cool costumes. who, odd enoph didnt take the opertoonity to laugh at Billy's rabit. "Crystal should be hear any minut... and uh, Chris... she's bringing Jackie".. Chris grabbed his friends arm. "Dude!, she's takeing this that sieriously?!". he nodded. and both waited for there friend to arive.

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It was only moment later before Crystal and Jackie had showed up along with Matilda. who was in a pretty pink Princes outfit. and now every one was ready. Crystal seemed to be in a tight red full body suit. with little belts and straps going across it. dark long hair waveing fluently in the suddle breez she walked to Jax and planted a kiss on his cheek. "you boys being have?" she said. Jax grinning. "yessss, Taki". Chris's shoulders slouched. "....another...soul caliber charichter?" Chriss held his head they where older than him... and still played dress up.he looked to Jackie. who was dressed in a normal dark coat and black pants. with a pale white T shirt underneeth. his hair long and strait. "Well, atleast Jackie dosent still play dress up...". the tall young man smirked. "this is my costume... im Jackie". Chris cocked his head to the side. "Parden?"  Jax patted Chris's shoulder. "once you played the darkness. you'l know".

the older teens watched as Bily and his friends trick or treated. and Chriss used this time to ponder. there that worried... I mean... they wouldent bring Jackie for just anythign... because, Jackie... always brings his gun... he didnt like the Idea of haveing a loaded fire arm by his little brother. and would beat the *** out of Jackie if he even showed it off.

now that it was dark. they had to cross across town to get to the other houses. crossing the road and the few outlet stores. they where nearing the towns local pumpkin patch that grew more than enoph pumpkins for the whole town. and already Chris had a uneasy feeling. every one ddid wheever they passed this place. as the pumpkins in a particuler spot. always grew abnormaly large. and abundent it as suposedly the Spirit of Halloween that resided hear. as they neared the end they saw two horses parkd before them, both looking off into the field. Jackie slipped his hand into his coat. "no one owns a horse around hear..." and then an odd sound was heard. and caught every ones attention, the children hideing behind there guardians.

there stood two large men, they where about seven feet tall. and one happend to be the pumpkin headed man they saw erlyer, the other however his face was masked in a horned helm. both holding onto long swords. and both dressed equally thoutgh there where more keys on the Pumpkin mans suit. where the Horned helmed man, had none.

Chriss turned "stay back!" he hid behind the piket fence with his little brother and the rest. Jax peaking over. "*** thoes are real swords, who the *** fights like that?".

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They watched on as the steel smashed againsed steel. as the two battled on. they where speaking between blows but it wasent easy to hear what they where saying. it was a dead lock now. and the two growled and huffed trying to push the others sword aside. and in a flash. the pumpkin headed man knocked his aponents blade to the sky. causeing him to let go of his blade. and plunged the sword into him. and into the ground. waisting no time to turn for his horse.

Crystal. Jax Jackie and chris had mooved sence then takeing the young ones and covered there eyes.  the Pumpkin man lept on his horse and sped off leavbeing a trail of burning hoff prints as the Skull headed man's horse mooved to its master and lie down.

"Jackie come with me" Chris mumbled and hopped into the pumpkin patch. Jackie followed. his hand never leaveing the inside of his shirt... just incase. as they neared the Skelital man began pleeding with them. before they Even spoke.

"Please... you must...listen to me" it Rasped. Chris could see that it was no Costume the man wore. his face was made of many bones and his eyes looked like Ruby's. "The... Rider is... Useing the Mad king" he faught to sit up. Jackie keeping his distance and drawing his gun. "Who are you?" Chris said. his voice shakey. "Do not be afraid human. I... am... the Rider Herald..." he grasped Chris's wrist and forced it palm up. useing his other hand to drop a key into it. "If you...Value your lives...you must, Warn the Mad king of his Riders.,...plans, to merge...worlds". already the two men where alarmed and confused "Herald what do you mean???" but Herald was not answering his questian. "Find... the pumpkin door... it should be, one of the pumpkins hear, finid the key hole...open the door... Venture forth brave soul and find, my , king" he said in his last breath. as his eyes fell into his sockets. Chis shook away from him. falling back onto his back, Jackie nudgeing Heralds leg with his own foot.

"He's Dead chris.... and so is the horse". 

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Theres a hole in the world like a Great black pit and ists filled with people who are filled with ***!.

^Thanks to Eva ^__^ <3

Supose I should continue this >.>;;;

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Theres a hole in the world like a Great black pit and ists filled with people who are filled with ***!.

^Thanks to Eva ^__^ <3

*claps hands* Way to go blue great job

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I'm here now and reading blue but I have an invisibility cloak ^_^

0.o People read this junk? lol!, thank you XD.




Chis stood up , Petrified, the man was dead, was it a man?, could he consider that thing a man?, and his horse, died along with its master, like both of them were one. this holloween was verry disturbing. Jackie looked to Chris. "... what the hell man?" Chis looked to Jackies gaze, and there on Chris's neck, was a key on a black chain, freaking, he tried to pull it off, but to no such luck. "Jackie, what the HELL!" he stomped around and stopped only when Jackies firm grip was on his arm. "Calm down Kid..." he looked to the Rider. "... lets have a look around" letting go, Jackie stepped away and began looking at the pumpkins. "uh....oh, god your not sirieuos are you?" Chris's shoulders slumped, as Crystal, Jax, Bily, Thommas and Corey mooved behind him. "Listen, if I dont find anything, its cool, the guy is crazy and we can just report a crazy man being killed on a Halloween night, but if he is telling the truth, I wanna.....know.....oh, *** me" Jackie held his head, when he stepped behind a relatively large pumpkin. and waved for every one to follow him. Chris, being verry hesitant. slowly waked over. his heart sank as he gazed at the pumpkin. and saw a keyhole ontop of it.

"I am not touching that thing" he pointed to it, and when he looked up, every one was looking at him exspectiungly. "you guys suck.....really..." he sighed. and looked to the key. "this is too wierd..."

"pop"

every one jumped at the sound, and looked to the pumpkin. as the key hole filled and cracks came out from the top of the pumpkin, makeing a hoile in the top like a Jack-o-lantern, and a face was also carved out. the top falling into the pumpkin, but when every one peered inside... all they saw was darkness.

"...guys?" Chriss finaly squeeked after getting past the lump in his throat. "can we all just.... go home now?". Jackie set his boot on the pumpkin. "its hard... like stone" he looked to Chris with a smirk. "Cmon, whats the worse that could happen?". Crystals voice came from behind them now, speaking with authority. "you are NUTS!, Jackie dont you dare!". Jackie stood ontop of the pumpkin now, balenceing himself over the hole. "Haha, watch, I bet I drop two feet into this thing" hopping, he put his hands and feet together, and dropped into the pumpkin... all the way down a faint scream was heard from Jackie, and every one peaked inside. "JACK!!!!" Jax called inside, and only heard his echo calling back. "***!" he threw himself away from it. "lets get out of here!"

"not yet" Chris had one leg inside. "chris..CHRIS!" Crystal went to grab for him, and he smacked her hand aside. "Listen, I know this is stupid to do!, but that guy I think was telling us the Truth, now I owe it to Jackie to go down there, you guys can stay here.... but im going!" he slipped the other leg in and without another word slipped inside. Jax looking to Crystal sighed. "Well...." without another word Matilda and Billy were already climbing in. "Cmon this will be cool!" Billy exsclaimed, and before Jax could grab him , the children were in. "ah.." he looked to Crystal "...were gonna die any way if we dont get Matilda..." Crystal nodded and the two hopped in, leaveing only Corey and Thommas, looking at the pumpkin, Petrified. but what really creeped them out, is when the pumpkin turned to them, and its eye, winked at them. the two turned around, screaming for there lives as the two children fled from the scene, the pumpkin slowly, going back , to looking like a normal pumpkin.

 

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Theres a hole in the world like a Great black pit and ists filled with people who are filled with ***!.

^Thanks to Eva ^__^ <3

Hey if people read my junk then they will as sure read the junk you write lol but truthfully it is really good your story

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It felt like a forever winding tunnal, Chriss some times felt like he was slideing up, rather than down. he could hear Jackies some what meneceing laughter Echo up to him from bellow. slideing still Chris was still screaming. hopeing the slide would stop. right then and there. Relief  washed over Chriss a s he now slid in a strait line. and there was an opening. finally the madness would be over. but he heard Jackies laugh turn into a scream aswell when he flew out of the tunnel. "ohhhh. SHHHI-" Chris coverd his eyes and soon felt he was no longer slideing. but rather. he was falling. and had to open hi eyes. Looking down he was falling fast inot what seemed like a lake. but there was an eieri green fog all around it. almoast emmiting its own light. the water also looked merky. luckly the fall was not as far as it felt. and not two Seconds after Jackie struck the watter. Chris did too.

moments later the two emerged from the watter Gaspin for air, "Jackie you ASS HOLE!" brushing his long Raven black hair from his face the older teen chuckled. again. "I didnt say you had to come squirt" Chris growled and noticed somthing odd about the water they were in. "...are.... there...apples....in this lake?" Looking down, Jackie spotted one and snatched it up, and took a bite out of it carelessly. "...Yup" he finally confirmed and munched away. Chris wasent going to lecture him.

Two more screems were heard above. Jackie grabbed ahold of Chris and draged him to shore. before Jax and Crystal landed on them, now standing in the green fog they watched the two. Crystal landing in the watter. like the athleat swimmer she was. while Jax created an enormus splash. "JAX?" Jackie stepped into the water walkig falwards as Crystal swam up beside him, and got to her feet. "Clumsy basterd Sunk like a stone!" she whipped around. "JAX?" they called again.

but there was nothing........

 

Suddenly a few feet away Emerged Jax. still in his bulky costume. it would have seemed he mearly Walked from the bottom of the lake to the shore.  the group ran to check on there friend. "Hey, Jax you ok buddy?" Jackie slapped his arm and was surprised to how...hard his skin felt. the lake was verry dimly lit so it was hard to see. "Yea.. im amazed this piece of crap didnt shatter. he tapped the cardbored sword againsed the make shift armor. but all went still and silent when the sound of Metal clanged together.

".....jax?" Crystal questiond. and when he turned to face them the real fright sank in. Jax's blue eyes were a glowing yellow. his one exsposed arm was a redish and prickled bulky arm. the Armore he wore and sword he held was now as real as ever. It was like he was Nightmare. "shhhhhhit" he commented looking to himself. Crystal coverd her mouth and Jackie walked closer ./ tapping his arm and chest plate. "Dude, what the hell?" every one seemed lost for words... and Jax's head snapped up. "Every one out of the water!" it was the only exsplanation. it must have been the water. or somthing. every one mooved out. and sat a bit aways from the lake., catching there breath. Jackie did a head count.

"Ah... all four of us are hear". Chris again. froze in fright. "um....where's Matilda....where is my BROTHER!?"

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Im going to take a break on writeing, maybe ill go threw my old posts and get everything the way I want it.

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Theres a hole in the world like a Great black pit and ists filled with people who are filled with ***!.

^Thanks to Eva ^__^ <3

Alright, Ive got a Drama story stuck in my head, so lets take a shot at it.

Ghost seeker

The bell rings, and a locker door slams shut. countless happy school boy's and school girls ran past a particuler young man. this man was tall, and skinny. his legs were long and his skin was a little more pail than the other boys and girls his hair was ravn black and eyes were a un-natral green. as were all Ghost seekers like himself. remaining still his hand on his locker and his eyes on the door of it, he waited untill every one was gone but, there was still one young man standing beside him, stareing.

"Speak ghost" his eyes shifted but his body was still "we both know I can see you". this ghost was not suprised at all. the way it worked was ghosts could natrally tell when some one could see them or not. there eyes would look completely black to the deceesed one's. a ghost would come to a ghost seeker if they needed help resting. and by law it was the seekers right to help this ghost. "So I see, momma's story's about ghost seekers were not just a fairy tail" the ghost commented, his head snapped side ways, the skin of his neck was torn from whatever blow had taken his life. "Genorus seeker... my parents. they live in this town, and I fear they may never know of there sons's demise... I had taken a trip to new yourk but my Privet plain had crashed. by the time any one found me, I was un identifieable". the student watched, but kept his body still. "I see...." he pushed himslf from the locker and crossed his arms, tipping his head to look threw his own hair. "Alright Mr.ghost, what do I call you, and what do I tell them?"

My name is Machio, or just Machi I am eighteen years of age. I was born a seeker , my mother taught me the arts. even if my father advised heavily againsed it. I saw my first ghost at the age of five, it was not Untill the age of eight that I was able to complete its task. Now adays, people seem to dislike the Seekers. Maybe they feel left out?, Jealus?, Hell if I know, maybe they just think my eyes look dumb.

Machio was alredy walking out of the school. he had his message. he had his destination, wich was perfect timeing, seeing as it was the last day of school..

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Machio slung his back pack over his shoulder, letting the warm summer breez whip at his face. it wasent often he got a chance to be alone ni this busy part of town... "Machio". some one called, as exspected the serinity was broken as the... at times... dreaded noise of Mashio's friend called from behind him. "....Taro..."

Taro... Taro and I are good friends. first day of school sence comeing to this town he always had my back, even when he knew I got myself in trouble. like all of my friends. he is clueless as to what a ghost seaker is... I wonder... if he knew , would his out look on me change?

"Machi!" Taro called from behind. Taro was just a litle shorter than Machio, his build however was mutch more masculin, wich always made people think twice before messing with him, his nose bent downward from being broken in a nasty brawl. "what are ya doin al the way out here?, arent you going to go home?, I know the party isnt your style!". Taro's hard hand slapped Machio's back causeing the seeker to lean falwards. "...I was just enjoying a walk" "Haha, whatever, but like it or not im draging you with me tonight". the seeker shruged off the stinging on his back and sighed. "as long as you leave me alone for now, deal?" Taro, not quite exspecting his friend to give up so easy, gave a wide grin and a thumbs up. "Hah, not bad there Machio, I dont care what any one says about you!" the student gave Machio a wave before departing on his own way. "....good....niether do I".

As the seeker continued to his destination he thaught back on his past.  what he was doing, why he was doing it, and how he came to be at this busy city. it was far from a metropolis, moast of the buildings were only two stories high. he didnt know why his mother chose to settle down here, when she did, it didnt take her long to abanden him in a orphanage and flee without him....

Machio came to the door of the home he was asked to give the news to, his hand slowly drifted for the door...

*knock knock knock*

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The dooor slowly creeked open, and a woman stood at the door. her face showed great age, as did her back, this woman was short. moastly do to her back being bent falwards. they look pretty old...for haveing a young son Machio thaught to himself before speaking. "is this the Tegachi residence?" the woman nodded slowly. "what do you want young man... im not buying your magazienes!" he put his hand up slightly. "I am not here for such buisnes.... is the Mr home?, it is important that I speak with both of you..."

The family could be heard morning the loss of there son. Machio was a few steps away from there residence. "Your son t-...left a message for you" he had said. but they were already too upset to listen, the longer he went on the harder they seemed to weep. Machio had become used to this it was getting harder for him to care about this kind of death. he was not a complete fool, but this was the moast common asked task of a ghost, to give a goodbye or a final message. and always it seemed the same. always.

"I need a treat..." he said with a sigh. and was walking along the long side walk , trying ot remmember where that Ice cream stand he usually went to was. it was than he reialised his mistake. just to his left, was the cemetary. no Seeker enjoyed the site of the Cemetery's the bigger the worse, many spirits hang around them, moastly the angry one's, and it was always a disturbing site. Machio kept his eyes on the pavement. some becond to him, others mocked, others staired blankly. if a ghost really needed to talk to him, they would moove out of the cemetary. Just dont look at them... dont notice... and they might not think of you as a seeker....keep walking Machio he took the nearest turn to get out of site, and when he was, he started to run.

So you see?, with thease eyes there is gifts and there are its curse's. I do feel good about what I do. dont think other wise, I am studying law, and I wish to become a Detective, you know, solve crime, I supose I would be best fit for it, with the hole talking to the dead adn all.  in all honesty, I wouldent have been so eagr to go to this Ice cream stand... if I knew that there would be a ghost waiting for me there. and this one, had the moast bizar request, I think il ever recieve

"Just one" he stated his money already in his hand, and the Ice cream man, already held Machio's treat. he was more than a reguler at this place. and he always seemed to only get one thing... the delicious popsicle. he couldent place its flavor, all he knew wwas that it was blue, delicious , and cheap. as he unwrapped it however , he almoast dropped it. there, was a woman standing behind him, but. he had seen her before. it took him a while to place the face but when he did, he quickly walked off, waveing on for her to come along. he never did catch her last name. he only knew her name by "Iko" she was seventeen and actuaslly rather pretty. her eyes wer hazel, hair black mutch  like his own, though mutch longer. and colmed strait rather than the mess of a hair cut Machio had. one alone. Machio turned around. popsicle already half gone. "I saw you on the news" he stated leaning backwords. her gaze was on the ground. "im flattered.." her voice unhappy Machio pulled his treat away and waved it in circles. "Well... what do you want?". Iko seemed rather shy for a ghost. maybe she was still getting used to it. she had only passed a few days ago. "Well....Machio" he was suprised she knew his name. "I know... as... a seeker you help ghosts do things they cant do..." her eyes remaind averted as she mooved to sit down on a bench, her hands twisting in a shy yet cute way. "but....I was going to ask you to do somthing for me... I never got a chance to do". stareing blankly Machio let her continue.

"I...was... wondering..." she looked up, her eyes full of hope but her face showed she exspected the worst. "would you take me out?"

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Theres a hole in the world like a Great black pit and ists filled with people who are filled with ***!.

^Thanks to Eva ^__^ <3