Ch-yaahh! You write some wicked stuff, dude! I like it!

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Haha, thank you Rage. Il need to go threw correct all the spelling , switch out some words to make everything go well together =p. but later ~.~!

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Anime im watching: Bleach
Anime watched: Elfen lied

RP's im in
Castlvaneia
Devil hand
Silvermyths bane
28days later
Vergil the new king of Demon;s RP

just finished reading it all...

 

the holiday story:

to be honest, this one didn't catch my interest, it got very confusing as you continued to mash together a cast post after post, adding 2 more names to remember each time. small cast for a small story, after all, you can't devote alot of time to everyone, so you wind up with 12 dull characters instead of 3-4 good ones.

the ghost story:

 Gettin' better, it does have my interest, but I still feel somewhat detached from the cast. Remember, this isn't an rp. Go wild with descriptions, but don't get too wordy. also, don't be afraid of making something interesting happen every once and a while. (Yea, the guy can see ghosts, but maybe one of the ghosts from the grave yard starts to chase him 0o0 )
 

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Ah, thanks for the critisism. And I agree on too mutch f a Cast. I just needed more people because I had some Ideas to put in there, that one charichter could do >>;...

However for this story I think  (that means hope) you will find one of thease ghost story's intresting. but that one comes on later =p. thanks for reading my *** any how >>;

Machio dropped the Ice pop onto th eground in mear dis-belief. not only had this ghost asked him the moast bizar task in his ten some odd years of seeking, but no woman had ever asked him out. he blamed his "goth" like look about him, wich he liked but no one els seemed to care for. "...y-you mean?... a?" Iko stood up and shook her head smileing. "never mind...". but the Seeker spoke up again. "WAIT!"....wait" he brushed his hair and tapped his foot againsed the floor to think on it. it is your job... but how the hell am I supose to date a .... "why not?" he shruged Iko's face beemed with light. "Really!" she was over joyed wich Machio found verry strange...more like...suspicious. "why so exsited?" it was hard to see but this ghost was blushing. "Its nothing id ever exspierieanced... and, I .. just didnt think I would get to exspieriance it". the Seeker still found this all too bizar. "Eheh, well il try to make this as real as I can... but you know...". Iko's bright exsprecion soon turned to dark, her eyes returned to the ground. "...I know". Machio seemed to have a nack for ruining peoples mood. digging his hands into his pockets in serch of somthing to say, he changed his glance to her. "Friday at five... we meet here". a chill ran along his spine. nervus, he didnt know he would be trying to ease the heart of a dead woman liek this. and his words seemed to bring her a smile. "alright..." and the ghost turned and began walking away. "il be here...".

Lost in his thaught of what he was going to do Machio almoast walked into trafic, but the loud meep of a horn dragged his sences back. "..." he stood at the cross walk. thats never happend before he had to chuckle. at himself for the mistake.

"hey there...Seeker".

Machio whipped around to see a yet another ghost. but this one gave the seeker a bad feeling, mutch like the one's at the graveyard. "...Aye?" the mans lips wer parted, he constantly had a grin on, his hair was short but just enoph to go over his eyes, two of his teeth wer fanged he was wearing a butten up shirt, the top few buttens were torn off, his hands in his pockets as he seemed to stare threw his hair at Machio.

"...enjoyen yourself....seeker? may want to watch your self or you'll end up like me". like Iko there was no sign of a cause of Death. however from the news the only info he had on Iko, was she was aparently murdered, the killer was not found. "who the hell are you ghost, and what do you want from me?" this stranger remaind still his grin never fadeing or twiching. "nothin ,just a big fan of a dieing breed thats all" Machio crossed the street turning his back on the ghost, who followed him passing threw a car or two. "stop following me" he asked blankly. "Make me" he teased. "you do not want that". Machio turned to look over his shoulder, to see the ghost was no longer there. "some ghosts are just ass holes..."

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Anime im watching: Bleach
Anime watched: Elfen lied

RP's im in
Castlvaneia
Devil hand
Silvermyths bane
28days later
Vergil the new king of Demon;s RP

I'm sure I'll enjoy this one alot more...

does this take place in japan? those are some weird names.

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>_> I should probly state that huh.

Machio is Japanies for "path" or somthing like that <.<. Iko Is one I remmember hearing... any how, xKei got me a site for names xP!.

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Anime im watching: Bleach
Anime watched: Elfen lied

RP's im in
Castlvaneia
Devil hand
Silvermyths bane
28days later
Vergil the new king of Demon;s RP

what about "my" site for names mmmmm? MMMMMMM?

 

anyway, don't feel compelled to post after someone else does, you don't wanna quadruple post to keep your story going do you? mmmm? MMMMMM?

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Well, The story wouldent get any where if I waited for some poor fellow to post a comment lol... and I forgot your name of the Site, it got whiped out on my computer o.o;

Returning to "home" wich for Machio was a small apartment and of corce , it was a mess. dirty cloaths lie on the couch and at the end of his bed, wich hadent been made too long of a time. there wer no doores in this apartment, just door ways that led into other rooms. Machio found it a inconvieniance to open and close them all the time. there was no refrigorator, no microwave. or oven. as he was a horrible cook, and usually purchesed all the food he wanted at the Diner. he was considered "rich" for such a thing.

mooveing for his wash room, he pulled his shirt off over his head and slung it too the floor, frm there , one way or another it would wind up on the couch or at his bed, untill he had to wash them. "I need a bath" he mumbled to himself. some how the day had taken too mutch out of him, and he was in despret need of a shower. the only thing in the room, that actually had a glass slideing door on it. though the pattern on it made it incredibly hard to peek in threw it.

After his shower Machio was on the couch wrapped in a towell, watching the lone cieling fan spin, louseing himself in thaught.

...Who...Who would wurder a young woman... he shot up, and pulled his laptop off the wooden coffee table and flipped it open, it was already running and he began to surch pages that had information on Iko's murder.

"On June fourth in the Takade's school. it was like any other day untill four PM a Student was found dead in the womans bath room. Poliece say the Student was a Eighteen year old girl Identified as "Iko" though nothing provided a last name for the poor student... She was found dead, poliece have yet to reliece the cause of death but they did however tell us, there was no sign of a sexual assalt. but the door to the bathroom, was broken... Police are out now trying to gather more evidence. and were hopeing they can find it, as there wont be any students to disrupt the scene".

Machio slowly closed the laptop. if only corpses could talk...A woman with no real Identity...a Killer with no face... and some where out there, parents will weep to a daughter that never came home, and they wont even know she is dead... Machio fell back, covering his eyes with his forearm ...Bullshit

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Anime im watching: Bleach
Anime watched: Elfen lied

RP's im in
Castlvaneia
Devil hand
Silvermyths bane
28days later
Vergil the new king of Demon;s RP

Machio slowly closed the laptop. if only corpses could talk...A woman with no real Identity...a Killer with no face... and some where out there, parents will weep to a daughter that never came home, and they wont even know she is dead... Machio fell back, covering his eyes with his forearm ...It's time to prove to my friends i'm worth a damn...

 

that sounds better, the last part. <.<

 

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LOL, id totally take that line Break!.

Machi was up only when the clock struck ten rolling off of the couch with a hard thud. "AH!". he slowly climbed half way up, but a chill ran up his spine, causeing him to freeze at the sight of some one sitting on the couch, that creep ghost he had met before. he still wore that damn smile.

"a little late to still be naked , Dontcha think Machio?" he spoke in a  western acsent but had the trait of a eastern man. "Ghost, damn it state your buisness!" he reached and pulled some cloaths over to himself. as the strange ghost let his eyes drift only to the floor. still, his smirk seemed to only be his default face. but it was still a disturbing sight. "oh, just checking up on ya... Machio". he stood up when Machio did. "how did you get my name ghost?" the ether being cocked his head to the side. "Why dont you have mine?....Machio". the seeker's tolorance to this ghost was steadily decreaseing. ripping his Cell from off the desk and began to pack his backpack. "Tell me what you wont or leave me ALONE!".  but again, the ghost was alrady gone.

 

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Anime im watching: Bleach
Anime watched: Elfen lied

RP's im in
Castlvaneia
Devil hand
Silvermyths bane
28days later
Vergil the new king of Demon;s RP

Whoa...you've got some intense thought there, Blue. Ooh, tell us more!   :D

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It was thursday... Tomarrow he promised Iko to take her on a Date but her murder didnt stop bugging his thaughts. it now seemed to plague every thaught he set in his mind. but knew it would be rude to ask on there little date. and he doubt he would see her today, so instead he tried pieceing it together by himself...and was failing. but his lack of awareness let his good friend sneek up on him, and wrap his arm tightly around Machio's neck and rub his head vigoresly with his knuckles.

Taro smirked. "GOTCHA! what ever happend to the party eh Machio!!!?" he was shouting but this was Taro's usual behavior. "Im sorry my life has more important things in it than watching morons get drunk and try to grab other drunk woman and try to get lucky". he let Taro unleash his rage on his already messy hair, resistance was futile after all. when Taro did let go he slapped Machio on the back "Ah, you know, that might be your problem Machio, maybe you need a woman to spark that blank life of yours". the pale Machio however was always quick with a come back. "Maybe you need a few less". the sturdy Taro nodded slightly. "yea... working on that buddy".

"So whats up Machio, Heard Tegachi speaking to a teacher, claimed you were talkin to yourself again." a chil ran down Machio's spine. "Tegachi..." he mummbled. this was a older man in the school he was in, and for some reason, he was always on his case, weather it was grades or anything. maybe he had an Idea Machio was a seeker...

"That man is always tying to get me into ***, you know that Taro." the sturdy man sighed yet again. "some times I wonder." 

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Anime im watching: Bleach
Anime watched: Elfen lied

RP's im in
Castlvaneia
Devil hand
Silvermyths bane
28days later
Vergil the new king of Demon;s RP

: D

iz geten beta! 

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Machio had "Ditched" Taro at a bus station, and now was sitting down for a quick lunch he was almoast in the center of the building, it was quite large, the entrence wall was literly made of glass round tables scattered all around, and he saw he was the only one eating alone. his meal had consisted of nothing special really he had decided to try some of that Westerner food, a Burger sat on his plate and a side of chips aswell, as usuall, the side of chips was a disapointing amount.

"Supose I should get a suit...." he mummbled, takeing a chip and began to use it to poke at imaginary thaughts. "If im going to give this ghost a date, It should atleast "look" formal". "How about you just ditch her, probly save her the trouble of being crushed when her date cant even hold her hand!" that annoying Ghost...again, Machio didnt even have to look to see who it was. "Beat it" the Seeker comanded,and for once, the ghost did just that.

Although, the ghost was rude, it was rather hard to denie, he couldent do anythign a boy and girl did on a date, how would she eat food?, hold his hand?... his thaughs were disturbed to a rather loud individual behind him, his chewing was loud, and made a "slap"ing sound, he wasent sure if it was the melted cheeses or the mayo that made it so noisy, but it was, and after endureing a few minuts of it, Machio abandednd the half eaten burger, and walked out side.... where the Ghost was waiting for him.

"You know im right.....Dontcha Machio?." he remaind Silent however, infact...Machio was grinning too, and he began to run, the ghost haveing his hands in his pockets followed...and was mutch faster. "This is silly Machio, its not like im going to leave you alone if you try to run away from me, Dontcha get it?"  the two still ran, Machio turning into a ally way, and zig zaging along some buildings, the ghost fallowed, and it was then he would find out why Machio was grinning.

"Hey there" the Seeker spoke, and stuck his hand threw the ghosts chest, the ghost looking down, and chuckleing abit. "Machio?....what the hell do you plan on acompleshi-" the Seeker than made a grabing motion, and a red orb was now in his hand, and the ghost couldent moove, infact, he felt exscrutiateing pain. "M-Machio?" the seeker was grinning. "Whats wrong?, you didnt think us Seekers didnt plan to face moulthy ghosts like yourself did you?" however, it didnt look like the ghost was getting what Machio was saying. "In simpler Terms , Ghost....Rest in peace" The seekers hand tightend around the orb and caused mit to shater, and the ghost fell back, before hitting the ground however, it disapeered completely "You should have told me what you wanted.....jack ass" he flicked his wrist a few times as if getting residue off his hand, and tucking his hands into his pockets, Machio walked off in serch of a formal suit fto wear.

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Anime im watching: Bleach
Anime watched: Elfen lied

RP's im in
Castlvaneia
Devil hand
Silvermyths bane
28days later
Vergil the new king of Demon;s RP

The rest of the day Remaind un-eventfull, as did the negt day, untill it was late afternoon or, as Machio would say. "show time"

The young man pulled the outfit he had chosen for the eavening, and would meet Iko wear they agreed on meeting. pulling the black Tux from the plastic bag and beginning to change. so, what do you do if you run into a friend... he wondered, he didnt look nearly as nervis as he felt.

"Whew..." he let his nerves rest a bit, now standing wear he promissed to meet her. he waited a bit, leaning on a street light and looked about. "How does a ghost become late?" he wondered. "comeing!!!" her voice came faintly, and she was running for him down the steet, stopping just infront of him. "im sorry!" she admeediatly apologised, Machio laughing to tis and exstending his hand. "Alright, no need to be so apologetic" she went to take his hand, and hers passed threw his, both frowned slightly. "... we can... atleast act" he smiald re-asureingly. and she stood up strait. "maybe this isnt a good Idea..." her eyes wer averted, and just in the tone of her voice, Machio knew what she really ment.. "Oh, come on, you know, I can learn a few things from this date too you know" he chuckled. "I needed to get out any way" they both laughed a bit, and made off to find a suitable dineing area for them.

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Anime im watching: Bleach
Anime watched: Elfen lied

RP's im in
Castlvaneia
Devil hand
Silvermyths bane
28days later
Vergil the new king of Demon;s RP