This isn't a compition.
We are just puting poems on here to see how artistic people are thats all & you are intiteled to your opinion.
So if you think your poems are better than mine then thats fine with me.
That is what you belive & I'm not asying mine are better than yours but I'm not saying yours are better then mine.
I just want to see how good people are at poems & maybe some people would still like to read this poems yours, mine, & everyone eleses.
So no I will not take this thread down but I would still like to see more of your poems.
So please don't get mad at my desision & you are more than welcome to still partisipate in this! : )

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I could never ask for more now that I'm with "the one."

I live my life with love and pride

Hey devilsin come on the chatroom only me and vergil#1 are online.

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Sorry I haven't answerd in a while. i got stuck with one of the worlds worst computers.

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Relax. You only live twice, you know.

by the way, cool poem DevilSin.

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Relax. You only live twice, you know.

awww thanks. : )
I liked you poems too! ^ ^ tee hee.
But yeah ummmm hey have you looked at your Inbox cuz if not I sened you a PM.
Oh yeah & before I forget nero angelo I sent one to you too.
Hey nero (just a nickname if you don't like it just tell me & I'll stop k?) do you know Devils Never Cry...cuz if you do can you tell him/her that I sent them a Pm k thanks! ^ ^
ok well I hope to see more poems the next time I'm on!
K talk later guys.
see ya. ^ ^ tee hee lol

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I could never ask for more now that I'm with "the one."

I live my life with love and pride

i wrote this about my grandma before she died so please dont laugh at me....

 

I look into your happy face and see the light in your eyes
I can see true happiness under no disguise
Tenderness and love you always did show
Helped me to find my own way to grow
watching T.V. with you and all the smiles we shared
the touch of your hands showed me you cared
being with you was my wish and dream come true
If I could give one more moment to be with you
So much pain in many years past
You weren’t in my life, how did I last?
We came together again with heavy hearts

How did you live when we were so far apart?
My thoughts and focus were always unclear
You have taught me to always face my fear
How can I face all this fear alone?
Just reunited and soon you will be gone
I peek into your room scared of what I might find
Just hoping you will make it to mornings light
Another day together is a blessing we share
For one more day would only be fair
I watch you sleep after I read your favorite story
Knowing God is watching you in all his glory
Waiting for us to come together again
Taking you from me is the worlds greatest sin
Morning comes now sorrow is heavy on your face
I wish for one day I can take away your pain
As I lean closer to you with a tear in your eye
You say to me " Julie soon I am going to die"...
 I pulled back with tears and my heart hollow
The expression on my face was only pain and sorrow
Your eyes full of pain and a heavy heart
I know now soon you will have to depart
You tried to let me know it would all be okay
That I had nothing to worry about on this day
Slowly slipping like the sands of time through my fingers
The pain of you leaving will always linger
Destiny decided your fight would soon end
Though you are not yet ready Gods will would not bend
Our last visit to see you we had no idea you would be gone
The phone call we got it proved us all wrong
Seeing your body lying still and cold
Your gentle hands would I never again hold
Tears pouring out of me like the rain in the spring
Right now I know my soul with you, you cannot bring
My family looks at you as we take your ring
I may not be able to go, but you I can bring
I will never forget your affection and love
I know you will watch and guide me from above

Excuse me fellow aspiring poets but I had clearly stated that the thread was over. There will be no further psots here. I have made a poem better than any of you could ever hope to. So Please discontinue posting this is not an opinion it is a fact.

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We are all puppets, dancing on a string.

dante-is-sexy:

i wrote this about my grandma before she died so please dont laugh at me....

 

Awww this is a beautiful poem...I loved every word....you made me feel like I was going to cry!
It was soo great & I'd love it if you would continue sending poems on this thried!
^ ^ tee hee

 

P.S. It is a lovley poem. : )

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I could never ask for more now that I'm with "the one."

I live my life with love and pride

If you don't like people posting then get off this thered.
ok we don't want you starting anything with us so please just go.

To: Bubble King

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I could never ask for more now that I'm with "the one."

I live my life with love and pride

To any and everyone, just ignore Bubble King and any of his accounts. He's just a trouble maker, and will hopefully soon get what's coming to him. If we ignore him then all he'll have is his own self and other accounts to keep him occupied until the Admits log-in again. If we play into his little game then he has us to play with, someone as immature as him is better left alone.

He can talk however he like, but in the end I would much rather lesson to some child talking with horrible "l33t" such as "OMG! I am teh bst here! u all bow before me!!" then an overgrown child trying to look intelligent and belittling everyone in his path.

You said it Lobuk!
thanks for helping me clear this up.
I was geting really sick of being nice to him!
It's vary rude of someone to speack that way to people.
So yeah thanks Lobuk you really helped us out. ^ ^  : )

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I could never ask for more now that I'm with "the one."

I live my life with love and pride

Yeah. That guy was raly getting anoying. By the way, thats a cool poem D.I.S.

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Relax. You only live twice, you know.

Hey Quicksilver check your Inbox cuz I sent you a PM.
So check it when you have time k? : )

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I could never ask for more now that I'm with "the one."

I live my life with love and pride

hi there devil sin,


         that is quite  a poem u wrote.but i enjoy poems as much as anyone.u know that it takes more than the language to write poems.i really dont know wat it takes  to write poems but i suck at poems.keep postin more poems cus they r good.


                

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Awww thank you soo much! ^ ^
Thats soo nice! tee hee
Ok senice you asked me to I will give me a sec & I'll get some more!!! ^ ^ k?

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I could never ask for more now that I'm with "the one."

I live my life with love and pride