SPARTAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.... (lol, I just had to do that Xp...) 

Il never give up
Il never give in

Even if it would "free me"
it would all be to easy

I wont abanden this post
I will take to arms.

I wont give up, so gimmy all you got
you can talk big but you'r not so hot

You might out do us in numbers, but you cannot break threw my pride
For this earth and water. you can have it when ive DIED!.

CONDEMNED 
Cage me up and tie me down
Take my thrown and take my crown

Un fitting for the liveing
too good for the grave.
The light too bright
Its blood I crave!

You fight I bite
every last liveing one of you

your flight my night
il kill every last one of you!

the taste of your blood still lingers
[the cent still on my fingers]

your breathing hard, yet giving in
[join my kin]

your precious blood, turns to ash
[your hole world comes to a crash]

and now your...

Un fitting for the liveing
too good for the grave.
The light too bright
Its blood you crave!

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Theres a hole in the world like a Great black pit and ists filled with people who are filled with ***!.

^Thanks to Eva ^__^ <3

Great job on the 300 poem and the Vampi one. I liked both of them alot Matt! Awesome job! ^ ^

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I could never ask for more now that I'm with "the one."

I live my life with love and pride

Vergil-demon in blue:

blackhealer:

Vergil-demon in blue:

Dance with me in the ball room
this is where we loom

Come and take my hand my dear
There is no need to feel fear

Im going to take the pain away
Im going to keep your youth
Im going to make you stronger
Im going to tell you the Truth

When you laid your eyes on me
You saw a handsome face

But behind this face is Death and fangs
I was never taken to grace

you see you are everything ive wanted
my words of love was not a lie
but I cannot just let you die

So sacrafice the sun
Sacrafice your Mortality
Do not fear for your sanity

we will become walkers of the night
so give up your futile fight.

 

 that ws a pretty good one..i love it

i only have one thing to say...

TAKE ME!!!! BITE ME!!!!

LOL

O.O;....er.....well....

XD.... that positian has been Taken ~.~...Tasty...errr....>_> glad you liked the poem!!! *runs away*

hey did you take a bit? didn't even feel a yhing..hehehe and why are you running away??hahaha

hope you don't mind but i kinda got inspired by tour poem that i made a little something something...

here it goes...

 

The moon has risen high

My father, my lover, my lord, my life

 

My advent he awaits in the moonlight

To dance in an endless waltz

 

He will numb the pain i feel...

Remember my youth everlasting.

Give me strength that will endure.

Lies he will turn into the purest truth.

 

Eyes like the Deep dark seas; piercing,

Demons with angels faces so divine...

 

Death and new life awaits in your arms,

He heavens has long closed their gates...

 

I lusted for eternal sleep before you came...

Lie or not... your live i will forever morn.

Take me now and end my suffering...

 

Long have i forsaken Ra,

Long have i cursed my mortal life,

Now i long for your perpetual kiss.

 

The night will be our kingdom...

The light will be our wedding bed.

 

*note* Ra-the sun god of the egyptians

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"The sky cries,
The rain has fallen...
The river rises
I drift,i float to eternity..."
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Hmmm... not bad on your poem, Keep practiceing d(~_^d)

 

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^Thanks to Eva ^__^ <3

thanks very mush..i will..and good luck on finding your inspiration

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"The sky cries,
The rain has fallen...
The river rises
I drift,i float to eternity..."
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 The darkness.

The darkness keeps on surrounding you.

It is slowly burning and it is numbing you to.

You slowly wait for someone to come by.

Though no one comes and you sit and cry.Always waiting.

Always hating.

And now the days are darker.

And you feel as if you are beeing followed by a stalker.

Always hiding.

Always lying.

You never trust.

And your heart feels like it is about to bust.

Always alone.

Always cold.

It is one of my okay poems...... 

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You can call me DK.



Ocelot Image not made by me.

Vergil-demon in blue:

Hmmm... not bad on your poem, Keep practiceing d(~_^d)

 

i was kinda rushing when i made the poem..hehehe but i edited it and im sippose topose it now but i'm not that satisfied with the editting yet..hehehe but i hope y'all will  like it anyways...(",)

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The rain has fallen...
The river rises
I drift,i float to eternity..."
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Vergil-demon in blue:

Dance with me in the ball room
this is where we loom

Come and take my hand my dear
There is no need to feel fear

Im going to take the pain away
Im going to keep your youth
Im going to make you stronger
Im going to tell you the Truth

When you laid your eyes on me
You saw a handsome face

But behind this face is Death and fangs
I was never taken to grace

you see you are everything ive wanted
my words of love was not a lie
but I cannot just let you die

So sacrafice the sun
Sacrafice your Mortality
Do not fear for your sanity

we will become walkers of the night
so give up your futile fight.

 

hello again blue...i manage to finish editting the poem inspired by your your work..though i can't really say that i edited it because it totally sounds different...hehehe

 

The moon has risen high

My father ,my lover, my lord, my life.

 

My advent he awaits in moonlight,

To dance an endless waltz without light.

 

Death and new life awaits with your embrace;

Only for you will i forsake Heaven's gates.

 

Eyes like the bluest sky perceing,

A Devil with an angel's visage endering...

 

Take me now, end my suffering.

Rejuvinate a soul that has been dying!

 

Will you numb the pain i feel?

Give me strength so that i might heal?

 

Will you immortalize my youthful mask,

Like a porcelain doll with a smile that lasts?

 

I ask now for your perpetual kiss

Make me forget in a moments bliss.

 

Our kingdom will eternally be the Night.

Our wedding bed will forever be the Light.

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The rain has fallen...
The river rises
I drift,i float to eternity..."
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                                          Sea Serpent


My uncle lives in a cabin near the mountains.
Every summer I would go visit him and go fishing.
But throughout the years,
people would come up missing.

You see, my uncle lives by an enormous lake.
And with it, are tales of a monsterous snake.
I've fished with my uncle there for years.
The tales of this serpent were never
among any of my fears.

One day, uncle and I were to go fishing
with some friends on a boat.
So we grabbed our poles,bait and coat.
I smiled, soon we would be on the lake, afloat.

We got on the boat and went to the center of the lake.
All of a sudden, the water started to bubble
and the boat quake and rumble.
And what was stealthly submerged,
had now clearly emerged.

An enormous figure with a forked tounge,
it was among the worst of nightmares.
It was a beast only the depths of hell could have brung.
And a nightmare I could never have dreamt,
had only just begun.

It was a murky, dirty brown color.
Gave off a rotten, indistiguishable odor.
And indeed large enough to swallow
a small ship whole.

I watched this thing rise
out of the water with much surprise.
However, the worst part
about it were the the eyes...

The eyes resembled a snake.
Except outside the black, diamond
shaped pupils were a shiny orange-gold flake.

Inside those evil eyes, was a deep burning hate.
An ancient creature that's survived countless years.
Looking up at it and paralyzed, feeling so small and it so great.
Whose eyes instilled raw, unimaginable fears.

It sat poised, hissing with it's forked tounge flicking.
It's frightening razor sharp teeth
were glistening, with dirty murky water dripping.

It was then we started to scream
at this thing we have seen.
It lunged before we could escape,
and torn apart our boat.
To pieces of debri I tried to cling.
With pieces of our boat
I tried to stay afloat.

My uncle and his friends were overpowered,
and I watched in horror as each one was devoured.
It was then I blacked out.
I awoke on the sandy shore of the lake in a daze.
Layed there soaked, the awful events all a haze.

With tears I watched the sun set in the distance,
and a faint ripple in the water, slowly diminish.

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Well it's good to see this place has taken off again finally. Good poems people. Keep it up.



                                          Sea Serpent


My uncle lives in a cabin near the mountains.
Every summer I would go visit him and go fishing.
But throughout the years,
people would come up missing.

You see, my uncle lives by an enormous lake.
And with it, are tales of a monsterous snake.
I've fished with my uncle there for years.
The tales of this serpent were never
among any of my fears.

One day, uncle and I were to go fishing
with some friends on a boat.
So we grabbed our poles,bait and coat.
I smiled, soon we would be on the lake, afloat.

We got on the boat and went to the center of the lake.
All of a sudden, the water started to bubble
and the boat quake and rumble.
And what was stealthly submerged,
had now clearly emerged.

An enormous figure with a forked tounge,
it was among the worst of nightmares.
It was a beast only the depths of hell could have brung.
And a nightmare I could never have dreamt,
had only just begun.

It was a murky, dirty brown color.
Gave off a rotten, indistiguishable odor.
And indeed large enough to swallow
a small ship whole.

I watched this thing rise
out of the water with much surprise.
However, the worst part
about it were the the eyes...

The eyes resembled a snake.
Except outside the black, diamond
shaped pupils were a shiny orange-gold flake.

Inside those evil eyes, was a deep burning hate.
An ancient creature that's survived countless years.
Looking up at it and paralyzed, feeling so small and it so great.
Whose eyes instilled raw, unimaginable fears.

It sat poised, hissing with it's forked tounge flicking.
It's frightening razor sharp teeth
were glistening, with dirty murky water dripping.

It was then we started to scream
at this thing we have seen.
It lunged before we could escape,
and torn apart our boat.
To pieces of debri I tried to cling.
With pieces of our boat
I tried to stay afloat.

My uncle and his friends were overpowered,
and I watched in horror as each one was devoured.
It was then I blacked out.
I awoke on the sandy shore of the lake in a daze.
Layed there soaked, the awful events all a haze.

With tears I watched the sun set in the distance,
and a faint ripple in the water, slowly diminish.

Okay that's a weird one again XD you know what, whatever you write about, you just do it good! even a sea serpent! I like it, it's unique!

Cobalt:

Well it's good to see this place has taken off again finally. Good poems people. Keep it up.



                                          Sea Serpent


My uncle lives in a cabin near the mountains.
Every summer I would go visit him and go fishing.
But throughout the years,
people would come up missing.

You see, my uncle lives by an enormous lake.
And with it, are tales of a monsterous snake.
I've fished with my uncle there for years.
The tales of this serpent were never
among any of my fears.

One day, uncle and I were to go fishing
with some friends on a boat.
So we grabbed our poles,bait and coat.
I smiled, soon we would be on the lake, afloat.

We got on the boat and went to the center of the lake.
All of a sudden, the water started to bubble
and the boat quake and rumble.
And what was stealthly submerged,
had now clearly emerged.

An enormous figure with a forked tounge,
it was among the worst of nightmares.
It was a beast only the depths of hell could have brung.
And a nightmare I could never have dreamt,
had only just begun.

It was a murky, dirty brown color.
Gave off a rotten, indistiguishable odor.
And indeed large enough to swallow
a small ship whole.

I watched this thing rise
out of the water with much surprise.
However, the worst part
about it were the the eyes...

The eyes resembled a snake.
Except outside the black, diamond
shaped pupils were a shiny orange-gold flake.

Inside those evil eyes, was a deep burning hate.
An ancient creature that's survived countless years.
Looking up at it and paralyzed, feeling so small and it so great.
Whose eyes instilled raw, unimaginable fears.

It sat poised, hissing with it's forked tounge flicking.
It's frightening razor sharp teeth
were glistening, with dirty murky water dripping.

It was then we started to scream
at this thing we have seen.
It lunged before we could escape,
and torn apart our boat.
To pieces of debri I tried to cling.
With pieces of our boat
I tried to stay afloat.

My uncle and his friends were overpowered,
and I watched in horror as each one was devoured.
It was then I blacked out.
I awoke on the sandy shore of the lake in a daze.
Layed there soaked, the awful events all a haze.

With tears I watched the sun set in the distance,
and a faint ripple in the water, slowly diminish.

 

This poem is really heavy. I know that sounds odd. It flows at some points then drags you the opposite. Much like the rageing seas. I really like it. The poem is structured well for its theme.  

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                                          Sea Serpent


My uncle lives in a cabin near the mountains.
Every summer I would go visit him and go fishing.
But throughout the years,
people would come up missing.

You see, my uncle lives by an enormous lake.
And with it, are tales of a monsterous snake.
I've fished with my uncle there for years.
The tales of this serpent were never
among any of my fears.

One day, uncle and I were to go fishing
with some friends on a boat.
So we grabbed our poles,bait and coat.
I smiled, soon we would be on the lake, afloat.

We got on the boat and went to the center of the lake.
All of a sudden, the water started to bubble
and the boat quake and rumble.
And what was stealthly submerged,
had now clearly emerged.

An enormous figure with a forked tounge,
it was among the worst of nightmares.
It was a beast only the depths of hell could have brung.
And a nightmare I could never have dreamt,
had only just begun.

It was a murky, dirty brown color.
Gave off a rotten, indistiguishable odor.
And indeed large enough to swallow
a small ship whole.

I watched this thing rise
out of the water with much surprise.
However, the worst part
about it were the the eyes...

The eyes resembled a snake.
Except outside the black, diamond
shaped pupils were a shiny orange-gold flake.

Inside those evil eyes, was a deep burning hate.
An ancient creature that's survived countless years.
Looking up at it and paralyzed, feeling so small and it so great.
Whose eyes instilled raw, unimaginable fears.

It sat poised, hissing with it's forked tounge flicking.
It's frightening razor sharp teeth
were glistening, with dirty murky water dripping.

It was then we started to scream
at this thing we have seen.
It lunged before we could escape,
and torn apart our boat.
To pieces of debri I tried to cling.
With pieces of our boat
I tried to stay afloat.

My uncle and his friends were overpowered,
and I watched in horror as each one was devoured.
It was then I blacked out.
I awoke on the sandy shore of the lake in a daze.
Layed there soaked, the awful events all a haze.

With tears I watched the sun set in the distance,
and a faint ripple in the water, slowly diminish.

nice work man..it's nicelt structured...

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The rain has fallen...
The river rises
I drift,i float to eternity..."
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Nice one Cobalt!. it looks like your work is improoveing. 

=_= I on the other hand am haveing a hard time comeing up with them...again...>__> I want to write some poems but the words no longer pop into my head like they used to -_-;...

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Theres a hole in the world like a Great black pit and ists filled with people who are filled with ***!.

^Thanks to Eva ^__^ <3

No Redemption

He walks alone into a Dark black ring
All alone. looking for forgiveness

His sins his lies his fault.
Catching up... and catipalt...
Into his fate wich is Denied with burning hate

His head his mind his heart
Are all at a fault
Pain burns threw his skin
He pays up for his Sins.

Desteny takes place tonight.
Acrual fate set as right.

Forgoten to the grave
Theres nothing left to save!

Memmorys of all his wrong.
Spilling threw his eyes. and moulth...

Hearts Broken and lives lost
Stabing threw his burning skin
Like a million pins...

For one so selfish and cold
His bodys turned to mold...

Desteny takes place tonight.
Acrual fate set as right.

Forgoten to the grave
Theres nothing left to save!

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Theres a hole in the world like a Great black pit and ists filled with people who are filled with ***!.

^Thanks to Eva ^__^ <3

Vergil-demon in blue:

No Redemption

He walks alone into a Dark black ring
All alone. looking for forgiveness

His sins his lies his fault.
Catching up... and catipalt...
Into his fate wich is Denied with burning hate

His head his mind his heart
Are all at a fault
Pain burns threw his skin
He pays up for his Sins.

Desteny takes place tonight.
Acrual fate set as right.

Forgoten to the grave
Theres nothing left to save!

Memmorys of all his wrong.
Spilling threw his eyes. and moulth...

Hearts Broken and lives lost
Stabing threw his burning skin
Like a million pins...

For one so selfish and cold
His bodys turned to mold...

Desteny takes place tonight.
Acrual fate set as right.

Forgoten to the grave
Theres nothing left to save!

So gloomy now Blue what happened to all the sweetness? lol jk I really like this one. The ending is my favorite:

"Forgoten to the grave
There's nothing left to save!"  

and this part too:

"Stabing threw his burning skin
Like a million pins..." 

I know now I'm picking lines. XD I really do like this one though. All of your poems seem to flow so well. You can make a poem about anything and yet keep that similar flow :P ^.^ Cobolt and you (along with some other poets here) have a very stylized way of writing. Sort of like a signature/trademark you leave imbeded into your poems.

 Keep up the great work everybody! Love the poems!

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