Pulakanaho, you have 2 character slots left, I think. As much as I love the gods, I don't want it to get too Japanese-ish, if you catch my drift.

Actually the story's like this:

-The twins are in a special school for disabled children called St. Patrick's School for Disabled Children (or simply put, St. Patrick.)

- Adjacent to St Patrick is an ordinary school called St Mary, and its a high school. Its a natural sight to see some of the students from that school bully the kids from the other school....

-The twin's mother passed away from an accident, which render their father alcoholic and a little abusive; and this sculpts Fate's character as the one who keeps the family together.

...and there's more to come, actually. But I dont seem to have the time lately to write it down... =_=

 

Remember, this is an open-end story, nonetheless there is a basic story line of which I hope people could stay onto as much as possible; while maintaining the touch of everyone's creativity. That cool with you guys?

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If one man slay another of set purpose,he himself may rightfully be slain. -Sun Tzu,'The Art of War'

ok...still got two slot left..hmm maybe ill make inari and amaterasu.....or ukko yli jumalan ( X

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The thing I treasure most in life cannot be taken away
There will never be a reason why I will surrender to your advice
To change myself, I'd rather die
Though they will not understand
I won't make the greatest sacrifice
You can't predict where the outcome lies
You'll never take me alive
I'm alive

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puolakanaho:

ok...still got two slot left..hmm maybe ill make inari and amaterasu.....or ukko yli jumalan ( X

What is that? O_o

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If one man slay another of set purpose,he himself may rightfully be slain. -Sun Tzu,'The Art of War'

its my home countrys old god it  a head god and god of thunder there is not much knowledge about them they dissapeared when christisions camed

ukko=man

ylijumala=over god or something

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The thing I treasure most in life cannot be taken away
There will never be a reason why I will surrender to your advice
To change myself, I'd rather die
Though they will not understand
I won't make the greatest sacrifice
You can't predict where the outcome lies
You'll never take me alive
I'm alive

*i am aplying to become moderator in one another net side wish me luck!*(taking bets will i become mod or will i not!)


my theme:metal disturbed im alive


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Oh i see....:3

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If one man slay another of set purpose,he himself may rightfully be slain. -Sun Tzu,'The Art of War'

I would like to make a post for my charichters, but if you could give me a slight Idea What the "other world" is like?, weather its here or Via PM >_>;. Thanks!.

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Anime im watching: Bleach
Anime watched: Elfen lied

RP's im in
Castlvaneia
Devil hand
Silvermyths bane
28days later
Vergil the new king of Demon;s RP

The other world is actually a pit-stop to four different dimensions. But the other three dimensions were destroyed by a guild called the  Phantoms. The Phantoms believed that they rule big time, so they oppress other races in the world.

There are 5 races in the other world:

-Humans

-Taleileths (thought to be extinct) which are guardian angels with a human body

-Taleils which are guardian angels, very rare to find

-Phantoms (dresses up mainly of black hooded robe!!)

-Summoners; made up of Shamans and/or Enchanters. They have special levels that they could achieve...

 

The twins were mistakenly believed to be Taleileths, since they bleed but they could not feel pain.

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If one man slay another of set purpose,he himself may rightfully be slain. -Sun Tzu,'The Art of War'

ok i guess my guys are taleileths

name:inari

age:old...

exixtance:other world 

look:travelers suit and backback on his back.he got old looking face and small goatee

weapon:a staff and magic

backround:he might be the only one to be called a friend of shinigami

personality:he is kind and sometimes annoying

well ill post another one soon

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The thing I treasure most in life cannot be taken away
There will never be a reason why I will surrender to your advice
To change myself, I'd rather die
Though they will not understand
I won't make the greatest sacrifice
You can't predict where the outcome lies
You'll never take me alive
I'm alive

*i am aplying to become moderator in one another net side wish me luck!*(taking bets will i become mod or will i not!)


my theme:metal disturbed im alive


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 Temporary character.

Name: Anthony

Age: Middle-aged (meh I don't want to dwell on details)

Existence :Real world

Appearance: Random clothes, but always smells like beer or liquor.

Behaviour(and a little of his past): A depressed alcoholic man who suffered from the death of his beloved wife. He treats Fate and Destiny badly, but he (barely though) keeps the food on the table for them. He sent the twins to school too because her wife (before her death) was happy to see the kids going to school; therefore he wanted to keep the memory of her happy late wife alive that way.

Fighting skills : None

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If one man slay another of set purpose,he himself may rightfully be slain. -Sun Tzu,'The Art of War'

Sorry for double posting. There's something important that i need some of you guys to know:

Puolakanaho: Please utilise the opening and closing quote marks ( " ) for your dialogues. I cant seem to differentiate which one is a dialogue, a thought or the story without it. And the spelling for scythe is..well... scythe.

Others: Utilise the 'Enter' button, people. Paragraphing is important to 'pull' people to read your story. A big pile of words are not interesting.

 I hope everyone make their necessary amendments. And no, I am not angry or anything, just being professional. :3 Thanks for your support.

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If one man slay another of set purpose,he himself may rightfully be slain. -Sun Tzu,'The Art of War'

oh well sorry for not speaking english as my mother language and spelling scythe wrongly and all and wtf is dialogue???i dont use any that kind of i make them story shaped dude everybody  role in the way they want there are few rules in here but i dont think there is reading any rule that use dialogue i mean lots of people wont use dialogue

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The thing I treasure most in life cannot be taken away
There will never be a reason why I will surrender to your advice
To change myself, I'd rather die
Though they will not understand
I won't make the greatest sacrifice
You can't predict where the outcome lies
You'll never take me alive
I'm alive

*i am aplying to become moderator in one another net side wish me luck!*(taking bets will i become mod or will i not!)


my theme:metal disturbed im alive


http://s10.bitefight.org/c.php?uid=57190

valencia_44:

Sorry for double posting. There's something important that i need some of you guys to know:

Puolakanaho: Please utilise the opening and closing quote marks ( " ) for your dialogues. I cant seem to differentiate which one is a dialogue, a thought or the story without it. And the spelling for scythe is..well... scythe.

Others: Utilise the 'Enter' button, people. Paragraphing is important to 'pull' people to read your story. A big pile of words are not interesting.

 I hope everyone make their necessary amendments. And no, I am not angry or anything, just being professional. :3 Thanks for your support.

I plead guilty!.

Dont be afraid to call my name out when ive done a nono >_> lol!. il Edit it in right now =p!

puolakanaho: Actually many many many English writers (dont know about other nations >_>) use Quotation marks to let the reader know when some one is Verbally speaking. I can understand this may not be used where you come from, I also wonder if your Keybored even has it?.

It makes your posts more enjoyable to read, so if you could use them, it would be aprieciated =p.

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Anime im watching: Bleach
Anime watched: Elfen lied

RP's im in
Castlvaneia
Devil hand
Silvermyths bane
28days later
Vergil the new king of Demon;s RP

Vergil-demon in blue:

I plead guilty!.

Dont be afraid to call my name out when ive done a nono >_> lol!. il Edit it in right now =p!

puolakanaho: Actually many many many English writers (dont know about other nations >_>) use Quotation marks to let the reader know when some one is Verbally speaking. I can understand this may not be used where you come from, I also wonder if your Keybored even has it?.

It makes your posts more enjoyable to read, so if you could use them, it would be aprieciated =p.

 

Agreed to what Blue said. If you dont like it, its okay..but you risk your reader's attention that way.

i.e:

"I fail to see the logic here!" said Dante, an air of pride surrounding him.

 

The underlined sentence are an example of a dialogue. It lines out the difference between a story and a talk. :) And oh yes I dont mind misspelt words, I'll tell when there is any. Come on, we are all learners, nobody's perfect. Remind me if I have problems too. :3

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If one man slay another of set purpose,he himself may rightfully be slain. -Sun Tzu,'The Art of War'

well if it is about when people talk i do it as i was teached

-this is why i live for!yelled dante and grapped ivory

Dante grapped ivory then yelling"this is why i live for!"

thats how i mark my talking and pressing enter is just reflect and wtf is quation mark???

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The thing I treasure most in life cannot be taken away
There will never be a reason why I will surrender to your advice
To change myself, I'd rather die
Though they will not understand
I won't make the greatest sacrifice
You can't predict where the outcome lies
You'll never take me alive
I'm alive

*i am aplying to become moderator in one another net side wish me luck!*(taking bets will i become mod or will i not!)


my theme:metal disturbed im alive


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The quotation marks, puolakanaho, is the two little commas... +_+ (this one..!: " )

Ah suits you, then, just make sure you put the spacing properly to clearly differentiate the talk and the description.

 

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If one man slay another of set purpose,he himself may rightfully be slain. -Sun Tzu,'The Art of War'