Yeah, I agree. You've definitely captured what they are like. I have to admit it's quite funny reading what they say to each other ^_^

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Blackness covers all I see and all I touch
No feeling of pain just sorrow
My hand loses grip of the sword I held
And I turn to become a true shadow.

(\-M-/) Muah ha ha...Fear the Bunny King!!!
(='.'=) And his Holy Hand Grenades!!!!!
(")_(")±±±±± => Holy Hand Grenades (sort of)
Breaking News: It would appear that the Bunny King failed maths in Primary School, the test in question involving counting to 3!!! XD

:D Haha, thankies you guys. =]  I really do enjoy writing their scenes best. They're so funny!  Lmfao. *hugs Dante and Vergil*

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The third part of my fanfiction has successfully been finished! :D  I hope you all enjoy it!  It really did take more effort to do it. >.<;  I explain why there~ Part Three: Samhain Masquerade

I've also got some drawings on the way.  I scanned them today, but didn't get around to the clean up.

Like always without fail and forever more; do not redistribute without my direct permission, and also; feedback would be dandy~

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Awesome, I'll read it now ^_^ Oh, and can't wait for the pics XP

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Blackness covers all I see and all I touch
No feeling of pain just sorrow
My hand loses grip of the sword I held
And I turn to become a true shadow.

(\-M-/) Muah ha ha...Fear the Bunny King!!!
(='.'=) And his Holy Hand Grenades!!!!!
(")_(")±±±±± => Holy Hand Grenades (sort of)
Breaking News: It would appear that the Bunny King failed maths in Primary School, the test in question involving counting to 3!!! XD

Yhey~ Thankies. :D *hugs for you*

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I read the story, it's getting really good ^_^ I can't wait to see what happens next XP I just find it funny how Vergil is around her, how he is reluctant to feel any emotion XP Can't wait for the next part ^_^

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Blackness covers all I see and all I touch
No feeling of pain just sorrow
My hand loses grip of the sword I held
And I turn to become a true shadow.

(\-M-/) Muah ha ha...Fear the Bunny King!!!
(='.'=) And his Holy Hand Grenades!!!!!
(")_(")±±±±± => Holy Hand Grenades (sort of)
Breaking News: It would appear that the Bunny King failed maths in Primary School, the test in question involving counting to 3!!! XD

>_>...you have there persinality nailed =p il be honest , haha, and im likeing where this story is going ^__^. I find your imagination is intresting... one of a kind actually >>;

 

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Anime im watching: Bleach
Anime watched: Elfen lied

RP's im in
Castlvaneia
Devil hand
Silvermyths bane
28days later
Vergil the new king of Demon;s RP

Here's my latest works~ Enjoy. :D Some of them are from last week, or so. But, o well.  It still works.

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Nice ^_^ Very colourful XP

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Blackness covers all I see and all I touch
No feeling of pain just sorrow
My hand loses grip of the sword I held
And I turn to become a true shadow.

(\-M-/) Muah ha ha...Fear the Bunny King!!!
(='.'=) And his Holy Hand Grenades!!!!!
(")_(")±±±±± => Holy Hand Grenades (sort of)
Breaking News: It would appear that the Bunny King failed maths in Primary School, the test in question involving counting to 3!!! XD

And here's a finished Part Four: Three Days' Count.  Probably the point at which I screwed everything up, but whatever.  Gyaah.

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Screwed everything up O_o? I think that you did part 4 very well ^_^ I have to say though that that's a side of Vergil that not may would see XP lol Keep it up, it's good ^_^

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Blackness covers all I see and all I touch
No feeling of pain just sorrow
My hand loses grip of the sword I held
And I turn to become a true shadow.

(\-M-/) Muah ha ha...Fear the Bunny King!!!
(='.'=) And his Holy Hand Grenades!!!!!
(")_(")±±±±± => Holy Hand Grenades (sort of)
Breaking News: It would appear that the Bunny King failed maths in Primary School, the test in question involving counting to 3!!! XD

Well, Sence I dont know what kind of story your going for, persinally, I would have waited a bit for the Romance xP....but, thats just me :o. Its not bad, infact I rather like what your doing with the charichters. and as i have said before, you have your own way of writing a story that I find unique, keep up the splended job =]

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Anime im watching: Bleach
Anime watched: Elfen lied

RP's im in
Castlvaneia
Devil hand
Silvermyths bane
28days later
Vergil the new king of Demon;s RP

Well, what makes me so unsure about it is that we've really never seen Vergil in a romantic situation.  And romantic wasn't what I was really going for anyway. >.>;  At least not this early in it.  So, how he acts with her is just me pulling a conclusion based on his actions towards what few others he's around out of my ass.  Though, I have spoken with many people who have percieved Vergil in many different ways; heartless and power hungry, misunderstood, overprotective, etc.  Though, I think I'm one of the few that I know of who actually doesn't label him just one thing.  He's not a stoic character.  He changes and grows with learning.  He can be intellectual, he can be tempermental, he can be power hungry and over protective of what he sees as his.  And even if he doesn't want to come to terms with love -- of any sort, brotherly, romantic, etc. -- he'll still view Adelina as his and thus not allow many to get close to her.

But that there is all I know for sure; what type of a romantic person would he be?  Would he kiss her gently afraid to harm her?  Or would he be demanding?  I know he would be the dominant one and in control...but people like that can treat their partner as precious items, or objects only they can abuse.  From what I'm thinking, he'd be towards the centre.  He would be demanding at times, but as you saw, he accidentally harmed her when she was wounded and he let up on the force for her sake.

Bleh, I feel like I'm talking myself into a circle. o.o;  I hope I've got my dillema across though...after thinking about it, I really can't see any way of getting it wrong in the eyes of anyone but the creatours; whom I highly doubt will ever look at this, let alone get a shred of knowledge to its existance.  So, what the hell am I worried about?  This is my perception of Vergil in these types of situations.  If someone doesn't agree, they can go write your own fanfiction.  Nobody is obligated to read it.  I just like to hear what people think so I have a shred of a hint that I'm doing something right; if nobody wants to read my stuff, what's the point in sharing it anyway?

Okay, that's enough of chewing your ears off. :D  Thankies for the support, guys.  And thanks for letting me know what you think~  I've started part five with a renewed confidence.  Muahahahaha~ well...sort of. o.O;

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>:d!!!!!!!! WHERE IS PART FIVE!!!! WRAWR!!!! BLUE WANTS PART FIVE!!!!!

>_>;.....er.......*clears throat* just checking up to see how things are comeing along =3!

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Anime im watching: Bleach
Anime watched: Elfen lied

RP's im in
Castlvaneia
Devil hand
Silvermyths bane
28days later
Vergil the new king of Demon;s RP

o.o GYAAAAAAA!!! *hides* It's three pages long so far >.<;  Have patience!!! *throws fork at you*

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